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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. AnteUp

    AnteUp Elite Member

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  2. Drakula

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  3. Mass Appeal

    Mass Appeal Banned

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    Its going on a wall thats for sure..dont know about panels though ey..:p
    nice shit too.

    and mate its AHER now hahahaha
     
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  4. JETPACK!!

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    lookin ill raby. im feelin the first one a lot, the fill isn't as bad as you let on to believe. that Y is fresh as hell.

    the throws aiight.. but that A is hella wack.

    thanks for the shout b. i completely missed it earlier.. kabre had to point it out. hah
     
  5. Slushi

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    Fube what are you still doing in the toys forum?
     
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  7. NoCanControl

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    looks like a R, but didn't hear that from me..


    :x

    mass will just get mad at me. pretty gaye.
     
  8. atlok7

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    looks like apier but its still iller than normal.
     
  9. Fube

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    i still feel that i am a toy. to date, i have never posted any of my shit in the big boy forum. to me theres no difference as long as im posting somewhere.

    the best critic u ever need is yourself.

    ill toss my shit up there when i feel thats where i need to be, but as for right now this is where im at.

    thanks for the props tho!

    raby- dont like the toss but the other shit would look good cleanly painted, u have very busy fills and a decent color pallet, looks like u have settled in on a style, its all down hill from here brotha.

    mass- save as above, u catch a lot of shit for the style u got. but fuck what they think if u can paint it clean its all up to u, but with your kracs and drawings u really need to work on hand proportions and fingers and such.

    shiva - i hate it when people over lap with that kinda 3d, looks horrid to me, maybe use thinner lines instaid of the sharpie. also, i might not worry about flair and addons a bunch yet, get u a solid alphabet of simpiles, all the extentions and stuff will come naturaly and flow with the letter, your looks kinda forced.

    oak- im sure u catch a lot of shit for your work too. u got the simples now try and add to them, im not talkin wild style, just some flow to it, flex your letters, bend em, experiment.

    ante- what? i like the a. cant really crit ya tho, sorry.
     
  10. LOPe_GCI

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  11. AnteUp

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    why can't you crit senor? (fube) :/
     
  12. atlok7

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    lope thats nice stuff. just the drips are a little kracked out
     
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  14. squidone

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    Edit: dont know why it double posted
     
  15. hazetheone

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    Squid(Whats good bro)-A keep you bars the Same, and if you going to Curve them make sure they curve the same way.

    Fube- I like you'r style its dope, I like the little guy the "!" On it. It's Fresh!

    Lupe- ITs dope. I just think you could have kept the A, and the E the same size as the rest of the letters.

    [Broken External Image]:http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/9515/scan0006nd7.th.jpg
    Some stuff im workin on. New Colors (Green and Orange Deco)
    Crits?
     
  17. osnapizzel

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    lope. thats dope lol
    mass appeal. love the style, love the fill
    god im on a random rhyme spree tonight....
    dracula. not bad man keep sketching
    squid. try keeping your letter all lined up properly
    fube i love your simps style and the colors but your throws are iffy
     
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  18. sheltr

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    afarm4.static.flickr.com_3043_2623923596_bd26c8fa29.jpg_a4f0a23c50a330cf1bf56cae6c33a893.png
    crits on the S i dont like the other letters, just lemme know what your thinking on the S
    thanks a bunch d00dz
     
  19. hazetheone

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  20. maso1

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    I reckon you should try doing the curl back up on the S a bit simpler. Was that done with gel pens? makes me trip when i look at it haha.