your L would look dope if it was like the bottom of the E or N

 

This is amazing...exepct the fill is bad and kinda ruins it...for thta i thought you should of gone with oranges and pinks maybe..dark pinks.

 

a yo yo yo
and
hey hey hey

 

you need letter structure..that random lump in the I is really strange..that E is just...i cant even explain..just make use of your bars...use simple letters

 

yeah i suck but im slowly getting better, crits?

 

try making the letters the same size and use simpler styles

 

Use bars to begin with.

 

if you mean me, how do you use bars? lol XD, yeah...

 

read the new to graff thread

 

suttin simp im workin on 4 my girl
crits... i know the y has to be fixed

 

the Y is fine..its just the R..dont do the kicker leg seperate from the round part..mould it into it.

..Okay..i edited it lol.

 

thx for the crit.
but u needa chill with the second comment. dont wana get into that tho.

 

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Crits please? I hate my E ;x and i know it doesnt really flow well, im tryin to work on that.

 

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rasek exchange, fucked up the 3d and fill. im content with the letters though
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i kept fuckin up the a and r so i just let it be.

negor- drop the character, your letters look decent, but it doesnt seem like our using bars if u are keep them all the same width for now and keep the letters all the same height
dewster- deff fix the r and make the y one peice and not two, its pretty good though, throw some 3d on it
star- new to graff thread
sike- just go simpler
whatever happened to give crits to get crits????

 

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not feelin how this came out

thx for the edit mass.. dont like ppl talkin like that nah mean??

 

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For OBSEN

 

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Eazy E
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trying to get better with markers, not done yet, i need to get a white jell pen
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roberto clemente, not sure what i'll do for the background, any ideas?

 

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