^ thats sick you got a girl that writes and shes not horrible too haha skus your fillin up some pages huh haha good work man i like the blue and silver one the best but theres a lot of other clean fills and i like the thgrowie you did for seedz zof i like your style its different than all the steroetyplical bullshit haha you too aher haha i like yours too and although the note looks like you did it in two seconds its still nice mar nice simp i like the middle of the a a lot and i think i missed something what happened to cais? amd my toy entry for the new battle haha...theres no way id come close to winning but more people will see it and i like it: [Broken External Image]:http://img399.imageshack.us/img399/3115/masteup3.jpg
ranks, keep those bars a constant thickness. like the middle bar of your N just seems really thin in context. likin the S though. muter, sick, i would flip those ends on top of the T down instead of up. [Broken External Image]:http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/DSC_0077.jpg first time really trying extensions full on. if these are considered extensions. [Broken External Image]:http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/DSC_0078.jpg
tryed a new k yes or no? [Broken External Image]:http://img370.imageshack.us/img370/9350/34078104qo4.png scab firstone looks like it say sczr panks make ur bars more stright the end i like ur letters but not ur style
ii'm talkin about the letter style kinda. i know its rough, but i know that there's a lot that you could do with it is what i'm saying.
I like it tunka, maybe clean up your lines, and try to make the flow make more sense, right now its kind of everywhere. Exchange with proper (helm)-
thats lookin nice cabre, you down to exchange sometime? tunka- try to keep everything basically on the same level, i usually draw a line where i want the tops and bottoms of my letters scab- the first one seems too busy, chill it out some. on the second, bring the c out and fix the middle bar on the a ranks- basically just do what scab said tester- hot, ive always felt your style. on ur girls, letters arent bad but 3ds off in a few places
Cabre, i woulda maybe put the M abit wider like more stretched out cause it looks kinda crunched up with your L. I dont like the mini extension in your e a simple woulda looked hot there. Looks good man.
yeah the reason it is crunched is because I ran out of room, if you look closely the forcefield is cut off by the end of the M.
i think the extensions on the right of the K look a little wierd, maybe make the 'bend' a little less pointy, so it's just as wide as the extension-bars. the ones on the E look nice. but that's only detail, the rest looks nice.
Yo Mar, It looks sick and all but that big extension coming off the top of the M throws of the balance. Oaklander, you rock the most random shit ever, keep doin your thing. Abek, that E is ill. Some of the add ons aren't quite working.
oaklander-very weird,dunno what to say abek-gorgeous,,but i find the add-ons on the e and on the k a bit useless,not feeling the arrow on the k,but im liking the ones on the E and the A(even if i have the same ones my a's)
Ode to RASEKs "R" Just lookin for crits on the cracks and all that good stuff. This needs a lot of work...just posting it so it doesnt seem like im just biting. Although I wish I could cause my R is faggish. MAR - Diggin the purppp one. Nice and cleannn. ABEK - <3 I just think the K kinda throws the flow off. Maybe make the Bottom right bar kick in like the left bar of the A. Nah mean?
It is rasek ish but so are alot of R's anywho the overall sketch is good though, i like the cuts in the 3D looks good!
Clout- Its Fresh with the cracks just make them stad out a little bit more and clean it up and it look Doppy Fresh Nice tho.