your shits gettin good for sure jetpack, but i think you should keep postin in here for a while cuz imo the big boy thread is for cats that have been writin for years and have there shit down completely, not sayin your shit aint good just sayin postin in here is the best way to advance because of crits and whatnot lol. your gettin simps down for sure though, props on progressing so quick
big letters dont make people crit you anyway, give crits to get crits and post in toy throwies for the one-liner and toy tags for your tag keane- if you would've mafe you first e like you last and did something with your k that would be nice, love your fills as well. you should've made the k like the spine of the a or n rasek- nice but the bottom of the s on the last one looks weird to me, you need to work on your tag a bit aswell, your simps are a lot better than your tag but keep working with that tall style
nice finally some good crit thankx for that i was planing do redo the sketch and drop a similar piece i will keep you tip in mind for that
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quick on da run throwie... missed the 3d on the top fuck... View attachment 387380 i fucked it up my hand was being mad shacky that day....oh well itz an up View attachment 387381 billboard bombin with lime View attachment 387382
ayo meko (lime too) them throws dont look too bad (limes could use work) but the shoutouts on the left billboard are hideous. when you just scribble across the billboard like that it makes it look tacky and people get frustrated by it quicker. just do your shoutouts neatly so peeps can read em and if possible keep em out of the actual advertisements. see on the bottom left of that left billboard you got a nice open white space you coulda done a neat roll call going down ya feel me? keep it up tho, nice spot.
dope keep workin on ur letters meko and keep bombin shit thats hwat i like to see.. and its pear not peak
ight i got you.. when i was puttin the shout outz it was mad quick cuz a cop rolled down the hill and i seen it so i just throw them up mad quick... it was a quick bomb so itz all good... ill post an other one up with yallz advice...