yay! PM me the details an all that shizzzz. ill have a new sketch up soon

 

id rather see the second one in paint, but make the letters a lil fatter so theres less black and empty space
ya know?

 

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fucked up on the 3d.

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fucked up on shadow.

I need help on everything lol. Crits please..

 

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fucked up on the 3d.

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fucked up on shadow.

I need help on everything lol. Crits please..

 

alright cool thanks woe. ur stuff is looking good also .

 

thanks.
uhh septa..idk, bring your T out more?
idk, i hate T's..they suck to work with.
your letters just kinda cover eachother alot.

 

Aiite, i just dont like the huge space under the "T" thats why i put it so close. thanks though

 

yeha no i know what you mean, thats why i picked a name without a T
haha

 

ekes- i like the first one more because its a simpler style and it looks cleaner than your other sketch

septa - in all your sketches your T looks like a lower case R, try not to cover it up so much

woe - its good to try different styles but its better to just develop your own, i really like that e but thats probly just because gesus has a great style haha, your W needs a lot of work wich leaves be to believe you should still be working on simples for now

havent sketched in a while heres a pen freestyle from this morning

 

swolen, that steeze is fresh. i like it a lot, the way your L runs into your E kinna hides the letter. nice orb too

havent sketched in a while

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Nice Rasek See you been workin with that new style.

 

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dopeeee your O is hypnotizing me

 

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first bar method...tell me what i could improove

 

change the R, the bar across the A, and make the L smaller and the O bigger and more over and you should be good to go

 

thanks a lot

 

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my homie wanted his daughters name, im still working it out.
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and for the ranks battle, altho ima get murdered by the big boys.

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desipher, looks ill, i wanna see the color.
rasek - nice simps as always.

 

Not bad pen sketches man



Eeesh... messed my N up big time haha. Pretty rusty with this style, but trying to get it going
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hal- pen freestylin is the steezz haha nice stuff
zof- nice style the z is dopeness

this is what I did for the mass production, but I read the thread and saw that he was gone, soooo

and work in progress