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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Fube, Apr 10, 2008.

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  1. (SoS)Viruz

    (SoS)Viruz Elite Member

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  2. Nine9

    Nine9 Senior Member

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    Asic - Feeling the A now, alot better than the uppercase and previous forms.

    Viruz - I like the simpleness of it but it's maybe a little generic if you know what I mean. Like too much like the regular letter form. Your K is basically looking just like a K, O like an O etc..

    Maybe try and shape them a little different to how they are regulary, give each letter your own little touch and shape.
     
  3. (SoS)Viruz

    (SoS)Viruz Elite Member

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    Alright thanks, But what about the Fill.
     
  4. iVIBE

    iVIBE Senior Member

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    wallace- those are pretty good and simple
    viruz- its a pretty simple throwie but it works, im not really a fan of see through fills i like them to cover the letter so you dont see the paper underneath but its not bad
     
  5. Nine9

    Nine9 Senior Member

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    It's better yeah.

    Maybe try and make each part of the letter a similar width/thickness. Like your E's go thin at the front of the hole if you know what I mean. I think if they stayed the same thickness, maybe make the hole dead center, it might look better.

    I'm feeling the E's in general, it's just that I'd change.

    O is nice and simple, but I'm not feeling the N.

    Also, try smaller holes in your letters, see how that looks too.
     
  6. ThatguywhodrinksTea

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    Thnx man, any ideas about the N? :p
     
  7. Wallace

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  8. ThatguywhodrinksTea

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  9. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    asic
    try making your a a bit smaller
     
  10. FLSteele16

    FLSteele16 Senior Member

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    asic they are looking good but i agree with yarbles make the a smaller
     
  11. Tonberry

    Tonberry Senior Member

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    Yeah.. The A is a bit big. But the fills and colours are pretty solid. Keep it up.
     
  12. Hater-AiD~>

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  13. Nine9

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    G & A look a bit thin compared to the J & O, but otherwise it's tight. Maybe the A could be better if anything.

    I still owe you an exchange too man, haven't forgot. Only time I've had free I've been too obsessed in getting mine down lol.
     
  14. Hater-AiD~>

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    all diff..i think the last is the best
     
  15. ThatguywhodrinksTea

    ThatguywhodrinksTea Senior Member

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    I like it just not feeling the a man :p
     
  16. I GOT CLOUT

    I GOT CLOUT Elite Member

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  17. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    clout lose the swirls
    make the letters all same size

    joga lose the extension on the a looks like jogn
     
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  19. I GOT CLOUT

    I GOT CLOUT Elite Member

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    Never seen his work...post a flick?
     
  20. ThatguywhodrinksTea

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