to the three dudes above me, all i can say is tone it down. try not to put too many little add ons and wildstyle into your pieces just keep thinking about letterforms, get them as solid as poss. im liking it all tho, good potential definitly.
WIDER: colours are ill. your 3d and Design are dope. just the try and make your outlines a bit stronger and more legible. good stuff. what markers are those?
jade- work on the a a lot and lose the ghetto car infinity- hopefuly thats not wut u wanted it to look like, lol, i say get rid of the character things in ur sketches hater- make the ena at the end line up with the rest and maybe change up the first a for a little variety
joga, fix up the A's a bit, not feelin the tops at all. [Broken External Image]:http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/7545/rasek47fh0.jpg
rasekism that S is just so sexy. sorry this is fucking huge, its a rough t shirt design for a friends band but im redoing the whole thing with better letters and shit you know. View attachment 390365
put warning on the same line, took me a second to read it. or put a hypen in between the lines. either way, thats tight man. good letters
Niceness, bumpin this for you. On the new one you just posted, that S..mmmmmmmmmm. and Hoer - Same thing Rasek said, especially since you made Warning all steezy and Shot all straight simples.
did it for the wildstyle battle, but obviously that shit isn't being done or something reminds me of his... i wasn't going to post until the battle happened, but what ever.
haha that shit did happen dude, i definitely remember voting for your piece yesterday and on a side note i dont like how much your letters are overlaping and going into each other would look better with colour but you have some nice structure in that in my opinion theres a couple useless bars that it could do with out too but whatever haha
Little progression thing. I dont really even like coloring in the books...just seems pointless seeing as how its nothing like painting. But anyway, First time really trying any sort of background, excuse that, and the shitty camera phone flicks.