theirs been alot of talking in this thread, if you wanna talk post some pics. if some people sketched as much as they chatted they'd be much better by now pen freestyle i did for a battle with mean but then he buggered off, im not happy with the e but i think it looks better than an uppercase e narotik- that stuff looks nice, thats for sure. i won't know how easy it is until i try it, i think everyone else whos saying its easy should try it and see if its easy, if it is then you can argue, if its difficult then you can say its actually hard and skilled mass- that looks like some good photoshopping even for your first time, the charac is looking alot better as well, alot more proportional. i wanna see that finished notavandal- what you talking about? didn't you post that? made- go simpler, and make sure all your bars are consistent, in some places it looks like your not even using bars and remember toys, give crits to get crits
^looks good. I think the N is a little crowded up and the drop shadow is a little off but I dont know what it is about pens that make pieces look so damn good... nice simples in general
Last one i was quite happy with after i had re-done it in photoshop, im pretty much a first time photoshopper..even though that dosn't compare to mass's lol...crits?
The top ones have so much potential ... but the other shit is whack imo .. id stick with the top 2 theyre pretty flyyyyy
Not too bad Amen, keep practicing on that Some of those are pretty decent bleh, keep practicing, you'll keep progressing i wish i had some longer paper.. i always make my first few letters too big and have to squish up or make my last letters different so they'll fit makes it look a little crappy [Broken External Image]:http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/4449/photo104zr6.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/8770/photo105ys6.jpg
thanks for the crits...I'm still trying to prgress..i jus never really have the time to sit for a couple of hours cus of family problems and stuff and i cant really see where to go next with the top two:/
amen - i think you should straighten out your bars, the wavey ones dont seem to be working for you imo bleh - second one is dope id keep working with styles like that if i were you, love the throws too especialy that E zof - only thing i can see wrong is the 3d at the bottom of your F is a little off heres a sketch i just did cus i got new markers!!! fucked up my L but oh well it will have to do for now, and my piece isnt slanted upwards thats just how it looks because i took the pic with a web cam
spit..feelin the first one scream..dope\ raby...dope im gettin so frustrated with my style..i cant design an O for shit..i need some guidance..and some help on my letters crits?
just make the O taller like the rest of the letters, and have something stick out the top..like on your A
bottom page bump and woe...i try doing that but shit always gets fucked up..i cant make it uniform to the other letters..so i just threw the ying yang in there to say fuck it
joga - just use the same O that you would use in a handstyle just thicken it up raby - those are sick, im really feeling the red one with all the cracks through it coloured sketch thats such a pad quality picture, does it no justice im actually kinda proud of this sketch for the time being
some sketches i did on my way to and at cornerstone a few weeks back. View attachment 391047 View attachment 391048 View attachment 391049 aaaand some stuff ive been working with the past few days. trying to step out of simples. they are in chronological order so you can see the progression. crits pleaaaase! XD View attachment 391050 View attachment 391051 View attachment 391052 View attachment 391053
Joma; Use a regular O Swolen; illy shit. Sanek; nice style Urkel simple in drawn in the dark :\ [Broken External Image]:http://i280.photobucket.com/albums/kk190/gimmiegotshot/jwhite.jpg
mass appeal- im not saying im better than u and im probably not, cuz im fairly new at this but u dont need to post a pic after u colour every little part post every time uve completed a fair chunk sanek- im not fond of the n on the first one, but they did progress and the last ones look good, but get rid of the weird extension on the top right of the k cuz it looks like l e
just some ideas that rolled off the dome.... im thinking bout changing my tag from meko to noe cuz i write noe better then meko....ive been thinkin bout it for a while.... View attachment 391057 View attachment 391058 View attachment 391059 which one iz better? critz respected