Rasek, ur killin shit lately man. Keep it up.

 

oene - work on your style a bit more. make it clean.
ms - dont let the part of your S get fat and wavy. aside from, looks good.
kross - can control / redo your throwie. practice practice practice then paint.
rasek - i dont really like the colors together on the first one but nice as always.

 

RASEK your letters are getting better and better. I like the simps. Colors on the first one ehh.

 

that shit is hot probs man you keeping it real with does simples =]
whats up with the b&w piece on top looks like an rasek too ?

here are my new ones
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that second one is dope

 

rasek good shit ur gettin up

 

bottom off the page =/
bump............

 

good shit keane lovin the fillz

 

Sry about the page thing Rasek

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hopefully this is not sideways

 

Try making your letters proportional. The letters go from small too big.

 

yea ur throws need mad work

 

dam... there that bad

 

Oh, yes.

 

thnx for telling me ..

 

ahha just work on makign ur round parts faster, then thye wont be as shaky, also keep all teh letters teh same size ish

 

Try shading at the bottom and dont make the insides so busy. Clean up the form of the letters.

 

yo oene it seems like ur getting the hang of the side to side motion with the fill... i would work on ur letterz a bit more tho....

 

any crit on my work guys ?

 

keane, ive never been a big fan of your flow. its tight, but it takes some time to get used to it. your 3D is kinna messed up in the first one. but there's not much to crit, very solid simple letter pieces. some of the extensions are kinna ugly.. like the last E on the first one, but thats about it