so a reefer is like a clean train?

 

you can delete it...see the edit button on the bottom right of your post?

 

well i do now...thanks

 

Reefr is a refrigirator unit car..

 

i see

im pretty sure this is upside down but fuk it

 

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DAYS - Ditch the underline, halo, and quotes.Space your letters more, I didn't even see the A for a little. And I thought it was HYS.

 

I agree with the halo underline and quotes, But it looks pretty good, I was able to read it right away.

 

and stop writing days. NYC writer...sorry

 

He could probably get away with DAIS then right? I hate I's though.

 

Sense- your shit straight confuses me, dude

Ignore the random bubble shit.

 

I dont know if this belongs here, ive been writing for 4 years, i just though id submit one of my basic and readable tags.

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"ASKONe"

 

Just looking for some tips
"Alph"
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Crits por favor?
Meko - u snapped
Earn - No one liners yet, put work on your initial tag, just keep practicing and keep posting pics to c if your on the rite trak
Ask - would like to c more of ur stuff looks dope...lose the quotes tho...
Alph - each letter has its own style try and make it all flow

 

Arde- your tell Alph that he needs to make his flow more, then tell this other dude Ask whos stuff is all over the place that his shit is dope. Also, your handstlye doesn't flow at all, either. You can't drop knowledge that you don't have, dude

 

drone - Fix the E and looking good.
adre-go simple
Crits?

 

this needs a bump ^^ dope stuff man


new shit ...
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Ahem good stuff try keeping everything proportioned though