Woeski- Yo man the "W" to me is a lil too spaced out. Close it a lil. AKES- Nice but I would make the Bar on the "S" Bend a lil bit more know what I mean?
yup i drew this like 5 mins ago and felt like putting it on so here it is [Broken External Image]:http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee324/LKY1313/0817081839_0001.jpg
erase- dope man! the 1st piece whas my favorite lucky-put the leters at the same distance rsakens-the 1st one is cool that ideia the second loved the colors aeks-nice and simple i like it i hope you ppl give me some crits [Broken External Image]:http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/2550/aaoe2.jpg didnt like just modifaing my style a bit
VoyR .... Its missing 1 . Correct letter construction ,that i mean BARS , 2 . a decent 3d .. fuck 3d you dont need 3d at the stage your at now ... you need to focus only on LETTERS and lastly the cracks arnt beleivable .. they look mega weak .. look at the pavement outside your house.
Mane...you have some decent idea of lettering ... but at the moments all the extensions are out of proportion , place and the letters arnt alinged correctly ... the 3d is also wrong ... the New 2 Graff thread has some top notch guides on doing 3d ... and maybe save your colours for when you get better and begin painting... redo those letters on a straight line with little but no extensions ... then youll have a decent little peice. Atleast your using bars aswell .. thats a good sign .. you got potential my little hubba.
Sky-Yo how long have you been Writing Sky???? I can see you are using bars which is good. Stick to the D that is next to the one with the Arrow. Work with that. But they all look good. for the most part.
still havent found a good R yet... [Broken External Image]:http://img365.imageshack.us/img365/4432/newrhf1.jpg theres alot of MEGA toys in here lately... but oh well, as for crits: LUCKY none of your other letters overlapped so neither should your Y SKY the bottom M would look ok without the arrow and the... basically simplify it just a little bit AEKS would probably look better if everything was spaced out evenly
ok so its me ur residential stranger. ive been in iraq for past 3 months. got home on tues, and been on a bender since. but im hungover now so im gona chil for a few days.. i see ive been missed here.. duno why lol unfortunately i dont have flicks.. cuz got NO time to do shit in iraq. but yeh im always buzzin around, and will always return wen i got time.. also its a lil dodgy typing in this address on a government computer in iraq lol. so yeah, i painted once in the past yr and a half and it was only a throwie!!! not gona waste my time even posting it. just wanted u all (or whoever still knows me) to know that im still on it, and will get sum flicks for yas before i fly back to iraq next sunday... yeh sorry for postn in here with no flicks, but this was my old home, so figured i would post here.. check me out givin ma life story lol.. neway if u want, pm me, il get back sometime, but now im gona go look at the flicks thread for inspiration again.. inspiration has been as poor as a big bag of poor things lately lol peace NEMZ
SHROOM IT [Broken External Image]:http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/1187/070nr3.jpg LOVIN that shti KEANERone! sick style GIZR ive been meaning to develop something with that feel
A toy is a toy man, but giz you're shit is hot as hell. I recommend beefing out that R to balance with the G. Sky-the one letter that is most off style with the others is your E, fix it up and it should be looking good. Crit for my A plz.
dont add things before u got structure and flow. props for goin simple. but ya need to understand how to make it look good before u add things..
forces - looks sick deco - finish it sarz - lines are a bit shaky, but nice handstyle keane - nice style and colors made - really feeling the one above your colored piece voyr - the o and y seem off balance gizurd - looks ill i know the e is a little off on the last one