Aimr-nice and clean infoe-get rid of the round ends on the X. South pole-good stuff man, that R is so sick, keep it like that. Smooth-great stuff man, im jealous Rsake-where is my xchange? just kidding but seriously i'd like one, sick as always. Mabe-i love it, post more task- great simples keep with it evasion-holy bajesus that is nice. Crits aside from my shitty bar proportions and kerning(letter spacing) Just wanna know if my bar bends make sense and flow well together. It was a quick sketch.
Got really bored in science Ahem everything looks too forced make it flow and make everything looks smoother and push the letters in closer smooth dope task not feelin that k
im really really impressed with what ive been seeing lately. daps to -sixer -akels -hoer -MA!BE -keane aimr, tight letters, but fuck the background. add a 3D or a shadow, it'd look fresh as fuck. ahem, keep workin on the flow. that bend in the M kills the flow somethin heavy. have the spines of your letters slant the same slope in the same direction. it'll help, bring the letters closer, add a quick 3D. make your M less wider, the same width as the rest of the letters. try sketching smaller, i bet the results would be more beneficial.
man just stick with what your doing in that last sketch right there.....and work on your 3d its off in alot of places
half finished. [Broken External Image]:http://i347.photobucket.com/albums/p457/101duck45/proggression-1.jpg
ahem- make the bottom middle of the M less pointed akel- the letters are dope but i don't like the fill, too dull for me i guess i like nice bright vibrant colors not finished, gonna remove some stuff and add color and i'm a bit skeptical with the R, not sure what to change on it
View attachment 401343 that hoer you did is dope homey! hint- i like the western one. farik - lookin dope so far. akel- that is my favorite piece from you. that shits on another level.
my man hoer too fucking dope!! and anyone that misses me im in college now so i should be posting alot more :0D
The R kinda messes up the flow to your piece try not to cover it up so much with your A cause i cant tell if its an R or B other than that good work