i just removed all these stupid addons and stuff xD [Broken External Image]:http://img55.imageshack.us/img55/9270/icesdsimplepb7.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img55.imageshack.us/img55/icesdsimplepb7.jpg/1/w800.png
Looks like Ryan Gallant to me. Could be PJ too except PJ rides regular so thatd be a switch crooks. So yeah Gallant? But yeah I like it man. Sick job on the shading
mass-dope character croat-kinda wild shit man. more structure and youve got a nice concept. tastie-dont write that man. Taste BTR cyon-illin with the letters, not feeling the fill as much. JOB-Feeling that penciled j thats kinda wild above those 2 simples. continue with that man. your onto something.
new page bump croat-what the fuck is that 0/0 get you basic and flow down tasty i love your colours...keep it up hal...nice one but u should really work on the white...it looks wierd i dont know umm try making it sharper doke-keep on simps but try to do the bars more propotional...
Hahah ... my freind will be really impressed when i tell him he looks like Paul Rodriguez , PJ Ladd AND Ryan Gallant hahahaha. I got a flat land BMXer in the works ... KEEP PEEEEEELED
^^ here are some simple letters with bars. is this ok or should i drop going up and down? and just do Straight Key letter? anyway i did it for fun.. x) jupsick- looks pretty good mass appeal- that skater is dope [Broken External Image]:http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/6346/dscn0798ac0.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/dscn0798ac0.jpg/1/w640.png [Broken External Image]:http://img122.imageshack.us/img122/6496/dscn0799rf6.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img122.imageshack.us/img122/dscn0799rf6.jpg/1/w640.png
meb- pretty good, too much space in between the bars of the m new name for various reasons. any and all crits what you like and dislike MINOR-min View attachment 421170
Meb - I like your B's pretty consistantly, and I like all the letters of your top one the best. Lose the weird thing coming down off the E and it would good nice. Croat - Bad. The concept is interesting but poorly done. Try individual letters in different styles and make the bars thicker. Maybe just drawing on a larger scale would help. Those letters look about 2 inches tall. Minor - I like the overall look of the letters. It's nice when Stylized and easy to read can come together like that. The N is on the verge of being a Z.
Hahaha CROAT .. youv got everything right .. but youv blatantly drawn all the letters different heights ahahahahaha View attachment 421182 BEAR
mim-dont write min...other then that your i seems like it's just out of place amk-fresh insane(just dicking around with a wooooord)....i hate it,well mostly the e and s haha
finished. sorry bout the quality of photo, i have parkinsons. [Broken External Image]:http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/1277/003xf7.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img171.imageshack.us/my.php?image=003xf7.jpg mass - looks straight for an outline. you'll sharpen it up. smooth - looks good, i really like the n. mass before - i can't read it, i don't get the style myself, but it looks clean. min - not quite doin it for me. letters just look weird.