critss anybody(avove sketch)

 

Jobs- I like the simples but not the other ones, they just dont look right
taste- ill shit
duke- I like the d, the rest I dunno. I don't like how the letters get really thin and I dont like how the k gets overlapped on
kroc- bring the s back into that throwie, its to far out as for the piece I think you need a bar in the middle of the e. Btw, I have a new exchange for you in this post vvv
opte- looks good, finish filling it
atomic- looks ill! I dunno whats going on with the forcefield/background though
some- new to graffiti thread

For an exchange with kroc

for the serta battle

 

thanks synps ill do yours at school tommorow and have it up tommorow evening if thats alright

 

sounds great!

 

anyone down for an exchange bored as fuck..

 

bump

 

I'm down, I write synps

 

chiill ill have it asap

 

blackb00k g0t taken

 

ill have it by later tonight

bottom of the page bump for crits

 

Hey! first day here. :]
i used to be on stencil revolution but sadly they are no mre for now. :/ anyways i hav some stuff that could use some crits! here goes.

 

that last bump didnt work so ill just upload a whole bunch of crap from the last couple weeks

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theres enough for now haha

SYNPS - keep rocking those simples

imscared - DO SIMPLES and USE BARS

esco - same as imscared

 

imscared- dont try to make it look all fancy. do block letters or simples or shit like that.
klic- ur obviously following everyones advice.one in a thousand do, Keep working on what ur doin.





outlines/sketches. Fucked up the 3d on that s on one of em.
Crits?

 

Awesome ... just lose the bar thats facing downwards on the top bar of the S .. then ink it up.

 

need crits!!!

 

Crit it if you like..
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Lawl my friend writes ecso.

 

yo skin are u in florida cause i just crossed sum kid who went over me but ya anyway its ok i guess but work on the k and i

 

skin the K kind of looks like an R. looks good but the only thing i dont like are the little spaces missing.
ares your simples are sick.

meh.

 

ares - those look fresh, but yah what mass said, fix up that s and that could look pretty nice