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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Baron

    Baron Moderator

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    Way to rape the margins, resize your pic.
     
  2. Stolen

    Stolen Senior Member

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    im really feeling that stek peice juice keep up the simples. resperation im also realy likeing that peice but a good background would make all the diffrence. What chall think of this old stuff?
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    damn m8 amp,mdma and thc at one trippin outtttttt :D
     
  3. -Wings-

    -Wings- Senior Member

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    My old crew joined in with another and I decided to make a somewhat simple for it.
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    Bomb And Destroy.
     
  4. Stolen

    Stolen Senior Member

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    add some color homie
     
  5. jupsick

    jupsick Senior Member

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    wings....your struture is totally off
    mostlly the B
    all a total look it looks ok for a simp...keep on these things not ur old style
     
  6. thirdworldarmyAP3

    thirdworldarmyAP3 Member

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    First post of my stuff. A lot of it is sloppy. I always forget to take pictures so I can post them. I probably took a bite of some of your guy's style but this is where I come for inspiration, so thank you for the inspiration.
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    Also I'm starting to make some Third World Army stickers if anyone wants to trade. I'll post those in the sticker thread later. Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated. I'll load up a few of my drawing from when I was starting out.
     
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  7. militia

    militia Senior Member

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    It might just be me, its a dope idea but it reminds me too much of the cope throw
     
  8. militia

    militia Senior Member

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    ai383.photobucket.com_albums_oo275_militia_smak_IMG_1517_1.jpg

    a bit simpler than the other piece, ignore the white line on the M, i fucked up with trying to use a ruler and paint pen.
     
  9. Maste

    Maste Senior Member

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    i couldgive crits on this page but mostly its a general just practice and work on structure...keep it simple for a bit if your just starting
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  10. Stolen

    Stolen Senior Member

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    thirdworldarmyAP3-I like that isaiah block letter sketch.
    Im almost feeling that one sketch except you need to make more space for the ''N'' and work on the e a bit but everything else is gravy my friend.

    Militia-Try makeing your letters the same size so they match.

    Maste-Looking good man you should start putting more detail into the letter structure.

    There damit i contributed my 2 cents and thanks for all the crits... what u guys think of this? simple enough?

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  11. Thrice

    Thrice Elite Member

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    That's a big 123klan bite, mostly from Rise.
     
  12. ESKiMO2

    ESKiMO2 Elite Member

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  13. (SoS)Viruz

    (SoS)Viruz Elite Member

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    Sup all whatz good its yo boy Tear bringin back some crits..... I'm like on a break lol. Haven't Sketched it up in a while.

    But Link- Don't Bite man, you shit is dope, its okay to get ideas from other writers. For letter stucture and stuff cause that how you get better. By looking and figuring out how everyone else put together thier bars, which will help you understand bars more and throw down. Feel me.

    Eski- It Flows and I like your style. It's nice, i would just say next time try to connect the bars next time, for example the"A" The Cross bar dosent connect with the others. But its all good.

    Maste- I see where you are going but yo use blockbusters. Like the Letters off of the Block Buster Logo. Basicly what I'm saying is try to use Str8 bars Ight.

    Stolen- Like i said to Maste same applies to you. If you dont get it try the "new to Graff thread"

    Wings- Everytime I get on I see a lil Improvement out of you Keep it up.

    And to all the new folks..... you know who you are. Try the New to Graff. Thread....

    Well Im out. PEACE. Keep practicing.
     
  14. dark2

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  15. klic

    klic Elite Member

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    some shit i did in class, not sure why im even posting this, the letters arre horrid

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    dark - stop work about the colors and focus on the letters

    rime - that looks so fresh

    eskimo - looks nice but i think some of the attachments are not necessary (i.e. the light blue one on your e)

    mozaic - would look better if your z, a, and i werent so big and the top of your i wasnt curved like that

    crits...
     
  16. MontanaPainter

    MontanaPainter Elite Member

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  17. white

    white Senior Member

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    bump this shit....nothin on previous two
     
  18. white

    white Senior Member

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    sizz - nice throw, make H a little smaller
    srime - killin it those are nice
    montana - overkill arrows on first one couple pages back, last one, nice idea for fill
    rekon - change up the E a bit i think it can get better
    jers - i think the top extensions on the R are overdone
    eskimo - killer fill nice wildstyle, im not to judge though

    CRITS - top one is shit i know, and second one is inverted cause my scanner wasnt picking it up very good

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  19. wrekstyle

    wrekstyle Senior Member

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  20. white

    white Senior Member

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    give crits to get em