stasis-keep your bars the same width and work on having your lines for the 3d go the same direction, if you have a vanishing point bring the lines towards it, if not make sure they're parallel to each other hopefully that made sense. eskimo- i like it, but i think the bottom part of the B should be larger than the top, just my preference
umm....stasis and forgiven are the same person lol......the comment on the B went to eskimo(just to clear any confusion)
haha yea man i was rolling hard when i drew it dont like it now though. and Jester nah man its supposed to say toke.
well heres something im working on, the G and I came pretty naturally but the Z and R are killing me. [Broken External Image]:http://img354.imageshack.us/img354/6717/newzg6.jpg ESKIMO- idk about whats there in between the A and B DEWs- the S is kinda wandering off but i guess you already know that. the E is cool though. PYRE- got potential keep working. everyone else is either trying to hard or is just too average.
VISUAL CRITS! [Broken External Image]:http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/1356/eremok5.jpg I gave you a little gradient on the 3D as well.
stasis you have some good ideas but your structure needs work. imo, id get some simples taken care of. erem hot shit, feeling those letters. should look nice with a good fill. giz ive always liked your style, kinda different. could get the I confused with an L though. bump
I dont like the way you make your o's top right corner. Maybe if you made that even length ad just striaght cut off then it would look okay (Use bars). And work on how you bring that K down so far.
forgiven-like the outline on the last one but dont really like the letter lawlcat-like the first and the last but like the 3d on the second crits please
eskimo, that edit you did to that erem sketch is fire heres some coffee house shit I'm thinking that V would make a rather swell sticker.
shit.. i can't bring myself to just draw randomly in my book... i do one peice on one page. i can't just sketch all over a page. the v is very nice. put it on stickers. the simples are nice too. although the g's don't really fit.
trying out some newish stees. vagrant, shits ill, original style and dope simples. lawlcat, dont use that E until you understand how it WORKS. by works i mean what its made up of. draw it with bars. then do that a million times. then you'll get what i mean. if you that with all of your letters you'll improve tenfold. the throw you have in the 2nd pictures dope though. stasis- square one. bars. save your sketches so when you get better you can look back and see your progress.
nez89 good shit nice and clean style yet simple keep it up. vagrant nice simps would look nice on stickers like usual. scratch work on getting your letter proportions right go simpler than that same style but more simple looking.. new shit reads brio crits on it please.
[Broken External Image]:http://xs233.xs.to/xs233/08456/p1000830960.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://xs233.xs.to/xs233/08456/p1000831__1_707.jpg crits? erem i love that shit just awsome....fill it up and go bomb it 0/0 doke u know i dont see u proggress at all all u do is diffrent fill.... try using diffrent bars and gettin your structure down... giz just awsome im in love with ur sketches ;D