Sobr - lose the peace sign, work on your letters. try bringing them closer, they are too spaced apart. try writing it smaller and with a fatter tip.
All of the letters look nice but I know you can do something better with the R, it just seems like it doesn't fit.
sobr- im not digging the line thru the s, makes it really hard to read and repetative thanks for the feedback, working on some r's as i type
Some tags for yall getrad lose your sharp edges and try to make everything more rounded it'll make things flow a whole lot better erupto your tall hands are shit I'm not gonna lie but your scripts got some nice steez to them just keep working sosr forget everything you think you know about graffiti and start simple with simple letters no addons or nothing We all had to do it. lawlcats your shits on the up man keep moving
the pink one is pretty good but i think i like it more just cause of the blue/black outline out it makes it stand out more.
naa i know shit about graff. i use to post on here alot. i just was trying out a new style and a new name and wanted some feedback.
While we are on the subject of names, already a homie that writes Doke, too. View attachment 424302 View attachment 424303
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