fube dont do those drips? idk what it is but the thing is ur bars , 1 corner is sharp other is rounded , add like 1 corner on the left side and one on he other side or if ya wanna go bubble (curved) ill advise u too do symetric stuff for balance and swing when developping
Thanks acereborn for the criticism its a terrible habit i have noticed whilst messing about that its all to easy to add connections here and there for no reason other then complication which clutters the work. I'm not sure if I'm any closer to cleaning it up but criticism is welcomed. I was also wondering what some off you guys thought if i refined this facial freehand piece if it would work on a wall?
got lazy on the SEK. i may finish it later. [Broken External Image]:http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/8808/rasek58fg3.jpg rasar. keep the width of your bars similar throughout your letters lawlcat, simples are nice, throwies are weak. keep it up fube, you've got your own style down. i wanna see another piece from you my good man
You S is soo squished it almost looks like an 8. Your E is looking really fresh, try making the top a little more parallel, and your K seems to be a straight copy of your R and is really noticeable, try switching it up.
rasek i love that slick letter , try a s with e underbar like a V get me? so the middle will burn and make the rest come out hardcore
Rasek: What Baron said + maybe it's just me, but I'm not feelin' the left legs of the R and K where it curves sideways. Other than that, I like the way you're progressing. Maste: Other than the horrendous fill, the letters aren't too bad. The C is out of proportion compared to the other letters, and the skinny portions of your letters (A, M) stick out like a sore thumb. The O has unnecessary extensions that make it almost looks like a backwards D. Keep workin' at it. New name, first sketch: View attachment 424226
new page bump b squared i like the e, and the 3d. keep with the simps. maste dont worry about fills and stuff as of yet, get your structure down. rasek the R is definitely the best. the others are coming along nicely though.
rasek- the r,a are dope i dont think u put in as much effort on the sek, they kinda a diff style, maybe you should work on them a lil lawl- simples bro with bars. bump...been trying to get some crits or atleast some1 say something! say its ugly!! idc lol
ohsnap - lazy fill... but letters keep getting better. you sketch wayyy more than me :/ cant wait to see you start trying new things.
exitus : nice Obama osnapizzel : bump somethink new from me : its HAE... E looks like P what you think about this ?
exitus : nice Obama osnapizzel : bump somethink new from me : its HAE... E looks like P what you think about this ?