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i used all the gel in my shoe cleaner and a kiwi mop top will fit it fine and vice verse it leaves good drips

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nothing great but im getting alot of info thx


Sal 92

 

this is the simples thread not the ink thread

 

Alrighty, I'll do that and bring it back tonight or tomorrow.

 

Is this better?

 

yah it is, theres still a lot of room for improvement though but your getting there

 

trying to go really really simple...lol

 

i did this one before i started writing SNARL.

 

critzz

 

some stuff i just did

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dank - give crits if you want to get them, but keep on keeping it simple and youll get there eventually if you keep working at it, and connect your d so its complete and doesnt look like an n

kofin - keep working at it, id say your best piece so far is the SnarL one with the paint

 

thanks for the critss..i will try to give my opinion but i feel since i suck so bad no one will take them seriously

 

just because you suck (not saying you do), that doesnt mean that you dont have an idea of what looks good and what doesnt

 

crits?

 

Umm, IMHO, the "A" looks odd, because the top of the A is a different thickness than the top. I've circled it so you see what i mean.

 

loose the extensions and stick to simp's

 

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crits....

 

^your letters are pretty decent but i think that color shceme is horrible.

 

Take art class and learn what colors go well together?

 

prtty much all in this page need to learn work with bars better...
just do strait letters
and sphel or w\e stop posting that shit god i see u in every toy thread ur posting ur shit and getting nowhare 0.0 i saw u posting simps at blackbook thread same as this ones just diff size or diff word -_-
dont post everything u do...

 

the only reason that i posted the same thing in this thread was because i didnt get any crits in the blackbook thread i dont see anything wrong with that

edit: and marce i submitted that battle into the non-toy battle forum saying i submitted it there because it hasnt been approved in the toy forum after a couple weeks