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can i get some more crits please. an dont play ketchup......new to graff thread. i didnt even kno what that said until i looked at your sig
im not sayin you shouldnt like it. you should always feel your own shit but you should also kno what you messed up on an what you need to work on. you need to use less coloring an better letter structure. your jumpin the gun. if you start simpler you could end up goin back to that same style 10 times better.
i hate when people tell others to stick with "simples". Yeah, ok, to a certian extent, you want to get letter structure down first, but then again, people tell me i need to stick to simples; then i just laugh. I might be 'toy' but i know my simples, and when i got my style goin on shit im doing, thats my style, and "bullshit extensions" that 'aren't necessary', is my style. so bump all these fucks. leaks... im just guna say is let the style flow, it looks a little bit too abbrupt. keep scetching mass apeal... bump. shit is clean. im likin the odd style lol wings... bump, shit is very clean. im likin it a lot. ketchup.. i relle dont think its about the colors.. but hey, if you like vibrant shit, thats all good. im diggin the letter structure though. keep at it. the handies could use a little work, but thats all in due time. now for mine. not relle lookin for crits becuase no matter what you fucks say, im still gunna keep it, and my style. lol its for a chick.. says Brianna
Sigh... I guess I can go back for simples for a tiny bit. Buuuut, Im still going to do my sketchs. 50-50 you get what I mean?.. Also on your sketch one of your R's a put over to far in my opinion. And im not rushing it, ive been writing sense april 2008. Well only seriously writing sense august. :/ Heres a simple. View attachment 430206
Whats up? Heres a Dr. Stein throwy battle entry. Wings - Not a bad simple! Your K is a bit wack just extend the top bar thats going towards the I. Keep it up. Ask The Boss - I like the symmetrical style alot. Looking forward to seeing it coloured and 3D'ed Ketchup - Man start over and do simples lol ur wack Crits appreciated!
Skin, that's hands down the best I've seen from you. Pump these out like crazy, and I promise you'll develop a much better style in the end.
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skin. you know how i know you need to do more simples? cuz youre s is poopy. and has horrible structure. XP
stick to these letters and lose the extensions, you dont need to go all the way back to keyboard letters, but just stick to these basic letters and fix your I
bump for more crits first time bending bars. wing. thats so much better the s needs a bit of work. and just keep the bars a little more the same width. but thats what it takes to develop a proper style eventually it just hits you. Mass appeal- your style is dank sauce. a friend of mine who has been painting forever used to have letters like that.. keep it up.. clean as fuck. Monster- take a little bit more time on youre sketches. the peices you paint look great. but you wouldnt know that by your sketches.. letters are baller tho..
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