all caps make your statements more valid. Also, I never said that I don't have room to progress. You need to learn how to read man.
up your mum if you look closely, there are simple letters hidden behind an array of arrows and extensions. the letters actually look like the ones on your keyboard
I never said I have fingers, but im pretty sure everyone can tell. You dont need to learn how to use trite stereotypical empty rhetorical UNORIGINAL suggestions. And those pieces you linked too...I assume your rocking at their level? Mr.College certified, must be a head with a more firmer understanding of graff than those better who have got up on walls for years whilst he confesses to barely even touching something outside of paper. If Joe Sexton came up and gave my tips on how to solidify my fucking presses I wouldn't tell him "its my original style" or some shit. Annnnnnnnnnd Im done. No more words out of me on this topic.
well those last few pages were a waste of my fucking time. cats who think they know everything about graff but can't bust out a decent simples sketch should shut the fuck up and take some critisism. if its on a wall, yes its graffiti, but that doesnt make it good graffiti. take some time to learn some shit and figure out how to add structure and flow, then maybe you can take your foot out of your mouth and thumb out of your ass college boy. lets get back to the flicks and crits people stuff for talkin, some old some new.
neone - You need to do simples, if you don't want to suck forever. Every style is developed from simples, even the Siner style. Arguing in here and doing your "super original creative and super dope wildstyle" won't get you anywhere. If you can do a simple, than show it to us. I'm sure that you can't do a decent simple. Your stuff looks just wack. For talking. [Broken External Image]:http://img367.imageshack.us/img367/7450/sketchhhhhth3.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img367.imageshack.us/img367/sketchhhhhth3.jpg/1/w1024.png
lmao.. u got burned the post after that. Dont act like ur making ur style just because u suck kid. Admit ur horrible and do straight letters. & <j-one>- Dope.
watch how much you cover up some of the letters, like the E to the K, or atleast watch out when covering the joining parts of the bars, like where the legs of the K hit the spines. liking the new E though, and i actually think the S is one of your strongest letters. With the A i dont really like the extension on the bottom right leg that goes up as the rest of the bars going on that angle on the other letters have extensions hooking back, kinda kills the flow. i dont really like the kick on the left of the spine on the R either. also good to see rots is still around, thought you must have died or something
thanks for the critism, that helps. and nen one, your wack. siner has his simples on lock, thats why he can do next level wildstyles. a wildstyle is disguising the letters. you gotta have sound letters to try a wildstyle cuz you still need them to be visible, after filling a piece with extensions blah blah blah blah. long story short. your trying to run before you walk. thats like trying to light a spliff before finishing the roll. sure you can probably smoke it, but it'll be that much better if you roll it properly. just like your pieces, they'll be that much better with dope letters. besides your posting in the toy forum, so take what critism is being given to you.
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i know this isnt about letter structure or anything... but you need to fix that fill because i cnat even see your letter haha, sorry man
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j-one- dope spark- nice fill but , watch the widths of your bars. they should all be the same, its mostly on the s. Bizar- pretty nice keep it up