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holy shit oene, that shits Really hot. maybe make the o bigger, makin the throw the same size

 

Love it, maybe make your last ''e'' a little less fat

 

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crit.

 

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haha thanks.

 

quit using the rollers for backrounds and do some rollups!!! =D

 

i actually did take advantage of the rollers while i was there. That's Joke's first piece so i figured he outta start simple
heres my roller

 

where do you guys get em.

i mean like. buy or steal.

 

rollers and bucket paint? just use teh leftover bucket house paint, or you could buy it, but i thin kits expensive. you can rack the pre-made colors though. Then i just foudn soem extra rolelrs around teh house

 

we re-painted the bridge, lol. thats why we used rollers for backgrounds

 

hoer- thats really nice. i think the colours could have been better. i dont really think baby blue, piss green and blood red work that well together. but its very nice. your breakin away from your straight letters. i like it

joke- i would try to make the letters all even and give them straight bottoms. like put them all on one line like on a lined piece of paper

 

this is kool, the shadow effect over the letters is kinda sloppy but i think it looks kool overall, unlike


hoer- you can paint now, which is good, i know you can make that shit really clean but you should paint bigger, and just keep workin on them letters but nice piece brah

 

that zone piece is fly..

 

thanks. and yea, since i did that i've been sketching more. i think its coming along

 

Joke- You got the right idea bro, keep it simple for now and just work on your letter structure, Thickness of letters, straight lines, and shit like that. Your hand needs some work to kid...

 

Home depot sells buckets of paint that people bring back. Go to the paint section and ask for oops cans, the are only 5 bucks.

 

oops paint? lol im gonna try that.i wana get down with some rollers.