mue pomp ur letters into eachother make them fat give them some swing add some 3d u know dont stick to the straight shit forever that was what i did in the beginning lemme help u out a bit imma post some shit in a sec
Zase: I appreciated that PM man. Ill work on the 3-d today for sure. That travel book you got there is phat as hell. Thanks for taking the time to sketch that out.
rayz, it looks alright. make the slanted bar in your Z thicker. and take a little bit more time to make sure your lines are straight.
mue- looks a bit rushed to me. zase- nice clean, simple style and looking fresh, keep at it man. rayz- nice and simple with something different, i like it. although it isnt totally finished,the two bubbles on top of the A should have some shadow lol bit picky but thats all that i can see , keep it up too.
yea i realized that about the z... but i could probably play it off when i color it... like make the z and a different colors then the R and Y
zase im likin the pink one bomb that shiznat SENK-i like the second one well i like the s and e but the n and k arent very attractive work on that shiz it could come out nice
I dont like how i drew gort here at all..but i kinda didnt care at the time...lol...anyways whats good with the piece? all crits are accepted and this 1
i like the colour skeme on the second one but the letters are huge and your 3 is so small compared to it, also loose the bear and the ninja