Man you need to work on you Bars and that handy that you claim you were messin around on cause both are mad weak yo. Sorry to brust your bubble but it not good. Your letters dont flow due to your poor letter stucture which you have to devolpe by doing simps over and over and over....Only way ight
Bump cause it got caught up in the talk. "Mants- Overall artistically could look cool on a wall. Structure wise Id say go simpler cuz I aint seein good letters in there." Aoek, what letters are you seing in there, cause at this point i took your crit, then peeped you work and realised you didnt have a clue what you were talking about and you were just posting generalised critz cause youve obviously been told to work on YOUR letter structure before, lose the extention from the k, and all the little bump things on the side of ur a and o etc, keep the middle bar of your E to the same letter widths as it stems out from a smaller angle to expand and look like its out of proportion, also the k's main backbars letter width is weak in structure and gets smaller towards the bottom, fix the bar across the a and lose the other little nib on the left leg of the A, and i wouldnt worry about colouring them atm, Simples.
Ive decided Im just gonna do my own thing in graffiti at this point. In the past week I met up with the AIDS crew in the tri state area. Dope writers. And they were sayin im goin in the right direction. The little bumps on the letters is ME. Dont like it oh well wont lose em. The bar on the E gets little to fat cuz i WANTED it to do that. The bar on the K gets skinny cuz I wanted it to. The left leg on the bottom of the A very true. I need to drop that. The really thin line on the right of the K and the right of the A gotta go too. The middle bar of the A is there to stay because again thats me.
I was doing that bumped letter shit for a long time until I decided it looked like shit. You seem to do it better than I did though. Just keep letting your style progress and do simples on the side.
ok.. but fucking work on ur tag... god dammit that is what is up most ur tag and if its shit then ur shit plain and simple
Ight man Im going to be real with you alright.....Cause Eski was being nice on you...But Im not cause it wasn't that way for me. (BTW WHATS GOOD ESKI. Thanks for the Cs3 I got to show you this pic im working on) But your not on the right track homie you may think its fresh,dope,whatever but If you want you graff to actually be good then bad then listen to me. Start over....Start with Simps and then Devolve your steez from your simps trust me once you do that your pieces will look way better. Im tellin you man dont go by what other ppl pass as nice you want your stuff to over see others man real talk, sooo work on it.. ight peace.
mants, its true you got go structure. but you need to work on letter clearifcation. i have the same problem sometimes. Sage. thats REALLY sick that you talked to the AIDS crew. but you CAN do your own thing but I PERSONALLy think that its take you alot longer to get where you wanna go if yu do it your way. becauseeeee it took a long time for me to realize that bars are in letters, by myself, before Bs etc.. it took about four years. but then i see people like hate and mass, keane that are pretty good and have been writeing as long as me or less. and snaps aswell. its crazy town but sage, you are your own person. do as you please, just trying to help you out man.
Sage, anyone can start out doing graffiti, and 2 weeks in claim that they have their own style. Just because some one thinks their stuff is good, doesn't mean it is.
Mants i gotta agree that over all looks dope but structure looks weak View attachment 445822 fake tattoo i did with a girl on zooms
sage.fuck wha everyone else says do whatever the fuck you want.just experiment and keep drawing and keep tryna top other people.i mean yeah its good to study simps and you should definitely do that but more as a little practice you know?not like its a fucking chore but more like to get you a better understanding but thats it.if everyone just did straights it would be hella boring so,practice straights yeah but mostly just go experiment.but those writes got to go cuz it sucks.and also it doesnt matter if his shit is bad or good sooner or later hell figure it out and be like 'woah wtf is this shit' im soooo fucking tired man.whatever.go crazy.
rekon- for the frist bar on the r, make it jus straight not bent cuz it looks like its falling over lol aoek- its going in the right direction juss lose all the extra bars and keep it clean and if ur not gonna take advice from us, dont bother posting cuz thats hwat this forum is for, to recieve crits and use em to get better mants- i cant read it cuz there r too many useless and awkward bars... clean it up im doing a legal soon and wanted to try classy lettering cuz the owners arent to big on graff
it has potential but the e and u are to hard to make out maybe work on that other than that it looks alright...
not feelin that K snapple. dosent suit the rest of your blocky letters help a ***** out [Broken External Image]:http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/7691/canvas2zp2.jpg
the sideways S kinda confused me for a second, maybe try putting it right side up? your probably not gonna take my crits but yeah just throwin it out here
one more bump for this one, more crits please... rasek- the k is too covered up, make the left bar curve more right if u catch im sayin. its steezy as fuck though, props ohsnap- solid sewz- work on the e, but you pretty much got it