yup

 

so move the top line more to the right?? and besides that and the shadow and more crits anybody..

 

I don't really have any crits since i'd sound like i was talking outa my ass
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there we go

 

Zarb- You're letters are way to wide, slim them down and make you letters more distinct.

Eyeneversleep- Work on your letter proportion and it was mentioned before, your shadow goes on both sides just round it out before you letters curve up.

Beatshiswife- Edit your post by adding a slightly bigger picture so we can see it.

I was working the kinks out of my throw and i threw this S in to match the rest of the letters?
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Should I trash it or keep on working it out?

 

keep working with it man... but work hard.. dont just shift one line over and think its done.. to tell you the truth letters "matching" and letters all being Exactly the same shape arent the same thing.

and B.S. - that sucka throw is sick... your style looks so much like my boy AKER/BRISKO/DENS

 

snap,i always feel the face in the a's are like mad out of place...imo.

aoke-your shit would be so sold if all the letters were the same size and had a nice drop shadow on it!

 

B.S that shit is sick
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Didn't bother filling er in all they way, But critz PLEASE AND THANK YOU
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Anoe-The little dead space in your E makes the E look really outa size The leg on your N im not really digging ether man. But shits getting tight.
Need-Connect the top of your letters dog and you might wanna make your N look more like an N. Besides that, its perdy good man.
Reel- You are in no position to be telling B.S. is shit is wack, HAHAHA, I don't even wanna crit that ether.
Skwint- Make your shadow the same colour as your outline brotha, That black just looks FUCKED haha.

 

wack? I said it was sick, not wack....

 

lol i love my faces in the a's, even more then the o's

 

bleh,it just doesnt seem like a face letter to me :/

 

yeah i kno what your saying

 

word.

 

id move the middle line in the a down a little more. but other than that thats dope.

 

o, and go with a lowercase e

 

did this today..the n looks weird in this one. The others i sketched with this style look more like n's..idk...crits please...

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Shit man, Sorry. HAHAHA, I just finished blazing when i hopped on here.
Sorry again lol.

 

hahah its cool

 

Critz?