First black books posts... Need serious crits please.

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Ughh Simples, simples and simples, the for the last 3 post, you cant expect people to take you serious unless you can pull off a decent simple, you need simples down to gain a understanding of letter structure, before you go and pull off your crazy wildstyles.

 

LOL i had to quote this, the worst advice to give someone, copy my shit sketch to try make your shit sketch less shitty,arrogant shithead.

 

i really like the character, but work on your letters

 

Same as the dude up Really nice char

 

upload more later, my phone wont send shit..
=.=

 

valentine's shit, i've been doing characters and abstract shit besides graff lately.

 

that char looks alot like one i did today in school...

 

Oh yeah that reminds me Woe. I have to do that Valentine shit as well. You wouldn't believe the money I spent.

 

Sike- first one is dope as you probably know
Woe- I like the fill

Simples

 

cyto- getting better but your shadows off the bottom of the T and the bottom of the right leg on the A are almost exactly the same. so there should eitehr be a shadow on the A or off the T.considering you have the shadow going up and to the left, take it off the T. and putt a shadow on the top of the E and T

 

yo eskimo, meeeee too dude.
im spending like 190 already on dinner and a hotel room....=.= still gotta get a gift.
fuckkkkk.
romance is dead.
lulz

 

Sike: Ill stuff.
Tiger: That heart totally creeped me out.

 

Not really stoked about this one. Hate the E.


Wiked - The abomb prod looks good, thats about it though. For your letters, keep it simple for right now.
Sonic - Shadow and color are the last things you need to be worrying about right now. Not a single letter in that simp is solid. Keep at it.
Banjax - Simplesss.

 

^^ shits pretty clean dude good goin, but whats with that random s lol?
kinda old one i just colored

 

dank dont worry about coloring shit, work on your letters.


kameo pretty good simple, maybe start steping them up now.

 

I thought I was stepping it up? I just now started to use add-ons.

 

clout gots that ill flow

havent sketched in a lil bit

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