Shamy- Dont write "By Sham" that shits just weak. and don't do block letters. they just don't work out to well for new writers..... before... after... I know I should not of called him a toy because I'm one, but look at that.....
you mean like this? *fast just to see if i get what you mean* [Broken External Image]:http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/4766/p00160su4.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/p00160su4.jpg/1/w320.png
Saying the letters don't flow isn't even a critique. Give reasons why they flow - "The letter styles don't match up", "Letters aren't same size", etc. Obviously toy writers aren't gonna extract the meaning of someone saying there letters aren't flowing, thats the reason it doesn't look the greatest in the first place. I like that 2 letter throw yarbles. Dent - For the D put a drop shadow in the hole, and if your going to do a hole in the letter do it for the e also. On the N make the top line farther right than the bottom line(look at your keyboard N) and the T should be the same size, and not to crazy haha.
Shamy- I'm not saying you cant do a block letter throw, All I'm SUGGESTING is that you should start trying to get something clean and simple, because once you get a nice and clean throw you can start adding small things like highlights then fades etc etc etc Just go to the picture thread and look at the shit in your area or even the Throw Up thread. Aight... Thanks for helping me with my T. Crits?
[Broken External Image]:http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/6025/skwintthrowmv5.png [Broken External Image]:http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/skwintthrowmv5.png/1/w320.png Quick little throw and tag I made for you in Paint. Use it or not. Whatever. The "W" doesn't look that great in the tag tho....
[Broken External Image]:http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Picture10-1.png Hows my R? idk i feel like it doesent look enough like an R, what do you guys think? skwint- MUCH better
naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw if your name sucks dick and you have style, I'LL still beef your queer ass name so your telling me if someone tagged "PENIS" it wouldn't matter, as long as it looked good? Or tagged "QUEER"? and Shil is a homo ass name for once and for all CHANGE THAT FAGGOT ASS SHIT
He's got a point... Plus my homie writes Catpis, and he has style for days. Once I flick this roof tag I'll post. View attachment 452546
that looks alot better. stick with it just fix the s, k and dont bend that top bar of the W. nahmeeeeeeen?
[Broken External Image]:http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/9317/02160922473lo6.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/41/icevp9.jpg skwint- not really feelin the S but i like the flow of it zarb- yea it kinda looks like an A. its more like a mystery letter lol. but i dont really think any of ur letters match very well. play around with it some more
[Broken External Image]:http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/7658/sadsadfd6.png Why should i redraw my throwie lol and go thru all the trouble of uploadin it. Its inside of the gort robot. Crits?=D
yeo ESK you should just stop tryin to write.. son your shit is so played out and stop bitin dude forreal
shit is poop son...stick to your books for good..stay in that shit for like 5 years before you even think about hittin the streets...
who are you talkin about? and GORT im feelin the robot lol, not really feelin the G though and the hole for the R. kinda seems like the letters dont match
hittin the popos so i rushed the fill,well i rushed... View attachment 452572 [/QUOTE] yo esk yous a wack bitch and you suck you should just quit