cesure try going a lil more simple for crits

new name trying out new stuff
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Advice...... |Please??|

 

Just keep writing it over and ove3r again, look at RYPE's post, do what hes doing

 

Im trying out a new name. I can work with it more then my previous one.

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The E kind of just seems out of place.

Cesure- Dont connect all the letters like you did on your first one.
Azule- I like the a on the first one but i dont know about connecting all the letters.

 

^dude, dont write fresh lol

azule - give crits if you expect to get them

cram/gram - i like your m, not feeling your C/G

watsr - just make it one colour, it takes away from your letters.. dont make everything so loopy as well, and like you said, lose the add ons

 

yea Im gonna change it to fres lol wanted to see if anybody would say something

 

Peacebomb, maybe you should try a lower case E

 

Ahhh hmm im gonna try that.

Aesik- the a,e and s are curvy and your I and k are straight so maybe curvr the k a little.

 

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From a while ago.
Desik - get the letters to go together better, curving the letters or making them more simple could help, and dropping the halo, arrow and upside down exclamation mark would help it out too.

 

haha thanks its a g but yeah its not good

"RYPE" its a good start now give it some flavor

 

Thanks, and will do, I sort of added some sense then but I still need something more to add for style. I like the G you went for, just make it so it doesn't go through itself, but at the same time add the line in so we don't think its a c either, and making the m straight would help alot in my opinion.. Oh and why the #7?

 

Do it up

***Weekly Toy Handstyle Battle #1***
Word: Pineapple Express
Deadline: Sunday, March 1, 2008
Rules: One entry per person. Send your entry with the word of the battle in the title.

Send your entries to me (klic). PM me if you have any questions, or suggestions for next weeks word

old...
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shitty phone flicks
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just playing around with different names, thinking about switing to sanek

crits...

rype - work on your can control, if i were you id lose the quotation marks and have an underline or something else

aesik - lose the arrow, quotation marks and make all your letters the same size

cesure - give crits from now on if you want to get them, make your letters all the same size and round them out more and dont make them so jagged

 

bump this. i love circle tactics.

 

I agree and will do next time out and post flicks, Sanek looks ill, stick with it for sure.

 

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bored.
SARLE$0NE

 

Crits?
Exchanges?

 

Hot.
Except for the a

And sanek is good
Finally you're doin a name you can work with
You been stuck going no where with shpel too long bro I know you can do better with sanek

 

$1LENCR- I don't really know what crits to give, what you were going for isn't the style of my liking
big blue violence- I like it, the i,a and last n could be better but I do like it.
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Crits please

Big Blue - really not feelin your hand style. But everyone else likes is so... idk.
Rype- looks good except the e is getting away and the R is a little muffed up
Sanek- Sanek is the better name i would say