incase you havnt realized yet this is a graffiti forum, not a rapping forum bump, no crits just for an exchange i did with m+s, lol i dont know what i was doing with my M.. somebody send me a pm if they want to exchange with me [Broken External Image]:http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/MSSimplePiece.jpg eskimo - looks fresh with the exception of your R.. and id lose the bump coming out of the right of your M, and id connect the N together resp - clean it up, dont connect all of your letters boges - dont connect your g and your e, and widen up your bars too much shit talking, not enough flicks
oh i shall.i shall wreck him.that is if he wants to battle. liking this dude the only thing i would change is the n and make it one whole piece not two.still dope tho.haha.
yo is this a joke? i suck and even i know this is whack as hell for someone who has been writing for 3 years. mods please move this to a site for mom's who are proud of their toddlers' artwork
[Broken External Image]:http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/4305/p3033011.jpg here is some shit i did in English today so any crits? the only one i really like is the Z grub- i agree with above thats sad do simples! klic- not too bad the only thing i noticed were your proportions were off sometimes
ya klic just try and make them all even and the same size like wideness and all that and hey can i get some crits on my shit????
you tend to like curve your bars, nothing wrong with that but I think the bars still need a lil work b4 you move into that. STRAIGHT LETTERs is all you should worry about right now, and this goes for everyone starting out , write other words and letters while your still learning shit, dont let just 4 of your letters progress. otherwise its not bad but its not great either, just keep at it.
KNOXIN personally I don't like letters that look like they've been cut off at they're extensions. Instead of curving your bars a little in the middle like you did on the bottom and top of the e(the extensions coming off I mean) Try curving your bars in a dramatic fashion, but you'll know whether or not you can pull this off yet if it looks like shit. Just play around with things a bit more. You'll find parts of letters you've never seen before, or how you can make things LOOK like something, where you've never thought of doing such a thing. THE BARS YOU CAN CURVE EASIEST AND HAVE THEM LOOK THE BEST ARE THE LONGEST ONES. i.e. the part of the E that is long. Simpler upon simpler.
Knoxin - Dont bother curving your bars or adding anything extra at all. stick to extreamly straight, paralle, even bars. youve got the right idea though.
I was going to say this, but I looked at the rest of the page and it looks like he's being doing straight bars, just do whatever you feel comfortable with. And others will give you crits
Took a break from BS. Just now getting back to the swing of things so I'm coming back to the toy forum. All I can say is bars bars bars... Some old flicks for talking shit. [Broken External Image]:http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/7550/photo3uv6.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/1358/photo4oi0.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/5192/photo7ob8.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/460/photo12me9.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/9924/photo13im4.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/6287/photo14ey2.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/1043/photo16dd5.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/8805/photo18op6.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/4003/photo19pp0.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/593/photo20un7.jpg