yea the A on the 2nd one is bigger but the R is the same size as the rest of the letters... and the T is smaller than the other letters... but T's are a fucking bitch for me..

Like your first one not so much the 2nd..

 

Astar- the "a" on the first one is alittle odd, maybe get rid of the middle bump?
work on the "t", it kinda looks like a lamp

 

like i said T's are fucking assholes..

 

does anybody remember Oaklander? lol

 

found nameeeeee
and no worries Ts are a mega bitch

 

I think i fucked it all up with the coloring...
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If your from california, you probably shouldnt write cake.

 

why?

 

cake tko bay ish

 

Fuck =[[[

 

lol sorry try pizza or sundae? lol

 

hahaha or pie xD back to my search for a name

 

PIE N BIRD <----------- A local writer..

 

Ok fuck food names!
Xd

 

since you just started out, pick your strongest letters.
later on you can maybe pick a name with meaning, if you want.

 

you make a good point.. i chose astar because its what i first started writing and i tryd other names but they were all taken so i just went back to it..

 

what do you think....

 

cake-square your letters up
sin- don;t only round one letter in a piece...keep it all sharp for now.

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lol, shit made me bust out laughin


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freestyle. dead ass marker fill
crit it up....

resp- not feelin this one at all, too much goin on i think.
sin and cake- use them bars kids!