Jose- Its lookin good but I would remove the swirls from the P and the R/B? Yourmom- I like that but I would take off those things that are on the bottom of the S and Z [Broken External Image]:http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/7089/1000046.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/4459/1000039w.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/1214/1000037.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/5480/1000045.jpg And I know I need to remove the arrows aha.
crits? just the outline, wanted to get crits before i colored it in. i tried the bars thing, and idk if i got them fully down yet. [Broken External Image]:http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/5927/img1931x.th.jpg Jose-dont connect the letters together. Bigdream-the top one has more potential, keep working with it. Urmom-i cant read what it says.
Jose & yourmom, I agree with A Gash's comments A Gash, I agree on ditching the arrows, they kind of look forced, and I would personally also try and keep letter size/height conistent, otherwise, I like them WHAT??/ERA, Personally I like thicker letters, And I don't really feel the way the top and bottom horizontal bars on the "E" slant back in. Other than that I see potential. Took advice from some of you and headed back to bars, drew a couple of block letters, and even fucked up that. Ha Anyways, I tried something basic, just tried to keep it simple and clean. I know I'll get told I shouldnt have bothered adding color, 3D, shadow and highlights and shit at this point, but I was just testing out some colors. View attachment 460381
Wow I went crazy, fucked the R up and the upperight of the A, but eh....how is it? Mer-bars man(on the color in piece) Gash-all that shit is mighty phresshhh urmom-wow thats pretty cool, haven't seen much like that before...keep it up, and color that shit.
no...you need to be finishing that sketch homie.thats what you neeed to be doing.im still waiting for you to finish that shit.i wanna battle dammit!!!!
gash - like the third one witht he pink Kaiser - really like your "m" and the soapy bubbles Apocalypse - not feeling it, its all over the place and the colors aren't great still adding to my collection...crits?
wow...thats.well thats just awful. damn dude. practice.alot.alot alot.not hatin.well a little bit but seriously.you need to check up on that new to graff thread.pronto.
What is that supposed to say? FOrget everything you ever knew bout graff and draw the letters on your keyboard