its silver but it looks white..thanx tho

 

thats what i like to hear. i wouldn't exactly suggest doing it in someones spare room but hey if they're down with it thats cool, and you're still getting your fix with out taking it to the streets

 

thanks peg big up! for getting what i mean
my shits not hot yet and when i do take it to the street i want to to scream..."look at me i'm fresh as fuck!" lol

i can't stand shit that looks wank anyone can write on a wall or whatever...but its the shit that makes you look twice that i want mine to look like

 

this is my first post, so i figured i'd put something up. i'm not happy with this, it's my first attempt at anything outside of throwups. i didn't sketch it out or anything first, which is why i know i can do a lot better. i'm trying to work on can control. it's a girls name, obviously not what i write. any criticism is welcome.

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hey hawt thats neater than my shit now lol so don't worry bout it

the yellow outline needs making neater at the bottom tho

 

thats really sick hawt

 

a little quick one that i forgot i had a pic of
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hawt- that is lookin pretty good

any crits?

 

got to make the letters the same size and keep practicing, practice it slower so you can think about it and then slowly get faster.

 

for a friend.

 

@hawtlixx, Work on flow and can control. Not that bad but alot of lines could be more crisp.
@Rane, Work on letter structure, make all your letters the same size. Work on structure too. Use different sized caps for filling/outlining/details.
@Werse, your 3-d bothers me, besides that, its all simple but right.

 

The bars vary a bit too.
Thanks for the crits.

 

Just looked again, only one of the bars is a different size on the K. The J bar is just slightly larger than the K's.

 

Yeah, my friend who knows absolutely nothing about graffiti is extremely happy with it.
The walls are splatter painted with glow paint, and he has black lights in his ceiling, so its a big rave room with my glowing simple over his bed. it's cool.

 

tezer - sick as fuck like always

werse - straight simple, the only thing bugging me is the 'highlights'

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edit: decided to go practice on my "wall" a little more

forgot 3D between my N
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i hate too admit it but this is probably the cleanest throw ive ever done
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looks decent klic..get a bigger board..

 

thanks for the crits. I know my can control needs a lot of work, i'm gonna do something on the other side tomorrow so maybe i'll post it and see what people think... i'm getting my paint payed for so i'm writing girls names haha.

rane - I think you need to work on your letters, make them less blob-like if you get what i mean. i like that you're starting simple and not getting ahead of yourself. keep it up.

klic - I dig the ones with the blue fills, they're nice. the others aren't very clean imo.

and I love the second and third tezer pics, they're sick. the first one is good, i guess i'm just not into it.

 

fuck yeah guys i did all this mad graffiti vandalism on some cardboard in my back yard, gonna take some photos so i can post it on the internet

 

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