i hate you for two reasons

1. youre background and character is more thought out then your letters.
2. pac man on a flag? pac man thing is SO CLICHE, unless it has some kinda meaning to it like that was your fathers favorite game and he died or some shit.

 

good job using a vanishing point but your letters are fucked up, better them

 

ive got better letters i just try to think up of new ones..
and i didnt use a vanishin pint i just drew it up plainly
thanks for crits

 

the road or river of blood's edjes and the skulls are all moving to one certain point, a vanishing point. usually learned in 7th or 8th grade art class.

 

So anyone wanna exchange some throw ups i write dale

 

-yeh cocoa i wouldnt bother with anything but letters right now if i were you.


what do the haters think of this? I know S is too compact compared to rest.(the I is suppsed to be smaller due to the "sparks" but this S matches height which sucks)

[Broken External Image]:http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/4611/dsc01354og.jpg

 

I like the letters.
Just lose that crown thingy above the 'I'. Then make the 'S' and 'I' a little bigger.

 

thanks....

but fail on crit. unless you posted while I was editing.

 

SEK
SCRAMS
COCA
OTHER TOY BB

ALTS - that one looks a bit forced, if not rushed
SIZE - you know what you need to fix, keep em coming (work on those hands)

this thread has been absolute shit lately, if you need to work on your structure and learn bars go to the other toy BB thread, keep the talking and the beef to PM's this is a picture thread not MSN Messenger. and on that note wheres the mods? dont just make rules not to enforce them, delete the garbage and chit chat, this thread has potential if its maintained


experimenting with another style, pen freestyle with colour

 

for real you *****z make me want to come out of retirement this thread is so pathetic. step your game up fags quality work only, if you need example of quality work refer to the first page

 

bumping old toy shit cause its still better than half the shit posted on here today

 

nice shit b.s. police

 

oldest to newest, excuse some of the whackness but it still tops some of the shit in here




















...more to come...

 

Sorry to clog the thread with text but man..... That last canvas is fucking tight! So much to look at and take in. I'm really diggin' the R in crime.

 

My shit is not that good but hey its something to look at. you can see progression and regression throughout the pictures. when you quit graff and come back youre not going to be where you were when you left off, so if you want to progress and become good enough to post in the big boy thread keep your head on straight and your pen to a piece of paper. progress will come if you can take crit and practice.

Sorry for the massive posts and all the bunk sketches leading up to this, mods feel free to delete anything unworthy. peace

 

this page is how the whole thread should be

 

holy fucking fuck scream out either you NEED to get up a shit ton more or i'm blind an jus don't see you're shit around. that shit's stupid good

 

u spelled edge the gay way..