Chok - I also thought the fill looks tight on your second one there cept when I first looked at it it looked like it said MIOK cuz the C and H mix to look like an M kinda, but it is still a nice simple.

Im not feeling the S on this one at all but crits would be nice.
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wich colours?

 

here's another one.
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looks...umm...ok

Check out mine.

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@Zane, keep the bars consistent. Like with your Z the bar on the bottom is a skinnier than the top one and it looks a little off. Otherwise you're making progress keep it up

@Craz, if that's a simp you need to get rid of everything and start it over. There's no bars at all. For a throw its not too bad just let the A breathe more and tweak the Z

 

ohhh barz i thought.. sorry posted the wrong pic ill make a simp soon and post it!

 

zane fix the n

 

yup...

 

dont post stupid things like yup or word or okay or anything like that it just stupid, in fact i should even have to post this post since im sure it is in the rules somewhere

 

yea mybad you are true about that.

 

crits please

 

asher- thats dope man, nice fill too.
heres 2 kinda lame simps i did on a long car ride to......

 

Crazoner are u kiding? Ur a senior member(not that that means anything) but foreal that's horrid.

 

seriously everything on this page sucks balllls big time haha, you guys all suck stop graff

 

the overall letters don't look that bad per say, but try to fix your proportions, your letters get smaller and skinnier as you read it.

 

dont use proportions

 

being a senior member means that you're a bad ass graffiti artist

 

hahaha no doubt man axctually bein a senior member means your cope 2 for a day, being a junior member means your cap