I think it starts out strong but the end is lacking something and I just can't figure it out.
Crits?
And I just added the extra stuff for shits and gigs.

 

Nope. Try keyboard letters, niggha.

 

was that to me?

 

most likely
leave the extra stuff out even if its for shits and gigs, looks retarded and too busy
stay simpler, alot simpler

 

zooyook that lime handy is real sik i like how you incorporated the e and m it flows real nice i woudnt even consider that toy butt thats jsut me

 

some handys

 

thanks a lot man... i thought that was my strongest of the 3, go vote *****! lol

and woony i like those tags, they got mad speed, i think if u tried those real big on a wall with cans theyd be hot... some top to bottom philly style shit

 

yeah thanks i waz going for philly lol

 

dose ne one wonna have a handy battel

 

nah, south florida

 

Go give yourself a handy, faggot.

 

woah

 

hahahah fck your self you stupid bitch ass niggga you a fcking homo
ill stabb you with a unbreall nd open it up in side you bitch ass fagit cockmunchin dick licka

 

dad nigguhs trash anyways, fukk em'.

 

Woony- That shits dope and consistent, like to know what it says though

918- Get at those straight letters for a while to get the letters to look like their more from the same font and the same size

Crust- I like the connections, I think its a R that moves to the U and the S-T connection

Supar- I think thats straight- just one thing, I think if the bottom of the E was more rounded off like the O and S i'd be more fluid- but its up to you- take it or leave it.

Some stuff I've been messing with- it's just a handie outlined


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get out them hills stalls and be real *****.

 

shell703- likeing the second one. good colour choice but how would you do it on the street?
good way of signing a piece though.
good form and flow to it.
not sure about the first one. the outline overpowers the faint blue.
what do they look like in bold black?

 

good points- if I could get a spot that would be giving to the yellow I think I could pull it off, that with a calligraphy cap- don't think i'd outline it though (for the second one)

For the first one, you saying that the attention goes more to the outline than the blue fill?

Here's a black on red- the scanning fucked up the red

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I'll get some black on blue in a minute

 

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Black on blue- its AWAY- W got lost