I think it starts out strong but the end is lacking something and I just can't figure it out. Crits? And I just added the extra stuff for shits and gigs.
most likely leave the extra stuff out even if its for shits and gigs, looks retarded and too busy stay simpler, alot simpler
zooyook that lime handy is real sik i like how you incorporated the e and m it flows real nice i woudnt even consider that toy butt thats jsut me
thanks a lot man... i thought that was my strongest of the 3, go vote *****! lol and woony i like those tags, they got mad speed, i think if u tried those real big on a wall with cans theyd be hot... some top to bottom philly style shit
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Woony- That shits dope and consistent, like to know what it says though 918- Get at those straight letters for a while to get the letters to look like their more from the same font and the same size Crust- I like the connections, I think its a R that moves to the U and the S-T connection Supar- I think thats straight- just one thing, I think if the bottom of the E was more rounded off like the O and S i'd be more fluid- but its up to you- take it or leave it. Some stuff I've been messing with- it's just a handie outlined View attachment 533751 View attachment 533752
shell703- likeing the second one. good colour choice but how would you do it on the street? good way of signing a piece though. good form and flow to it. not sure about the first one. the outline overpowers the faint blue. what do they look like in bold black?
good points- if I could get a spot that would be giving to the yellow I think I could pull it off, that with a calligraphy cap- don't think i'd outline it though (for the second one) For the first one, you saying that the attention goes more to the outline than the blue fill? Here's a black on red- the scanning fucked up the red View attachment 533774 View attachment 533775 I'll get some black on blue in a minute