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CO snail,u suck go to the new to graff thread or commit suicide, nah , lol i once was that bad too, just try simple stuff first sin, it looks like u couldnt make up your mind between something bubble styled or a straight. Do it either one of them. i write ages but i did ges this one time (i know hes legend blah blah and some youtube guy is named gez too.. woohoo, idfc.)
thats the best piece ive seen in here for quite some time, but still, at some points you forced your style too much, like the huge extension of the s and the lil of the e , you might draw your t a lil bigger though, beside all that its pretty much on
DO NOT THROW THIS STYLE AWAY. You need a lot of work, but that style has a lot of potential. I actually write like that. I make my letters droop off each other and end in rips. However work on basic letter structure right now and then slowly work your style into it. Some people think that if your graffiti doesn't look like it came straight out of a fucking comic book then it must be a toy style Wastefour your piece is looking good. I wouldn't say it is the best I have seen on here in awhile though. massman the drop on that GES looks good, just work on making the letters stronger. remoz that is fire. keep it up. I like the sketch look you have going there.
there are already so many 'sear's.... unless uve been writing that a while id change it up.... but i like ur fill a lot actually... use more contrast with ur outline and the shell or forcefield though, when theyre close colors u cant tell where one ends and the other begins, if u used a lighter blue ud be able to see the 3d better is what im sayin... and make sure those drips all go the same way
kew i dont like the color balance in that one.... i like the connection on the letters though step 2 does that say baron??? u gotta check out the new to graff thread... lose every arrow in that pic and start with simpler shit, right now the pic just makes no sense in a lot of spots...u gotta put in work before u do a big piece and i can tell ur newer
crits step two dont do so many tiny as arrows if your gonna do arrows make them fit with wat your doing kew your letters are kinda wack im not gonna tell you to do simplies just work on ur letters sin lol same first but i dont know why you made your I so big and ur r so small idk just try to work on letter size massacre gez lol man im your number one fan lol jk and heres a peice i did in my planner xD [/IMG]
kew i dont like the color balance in that one.... i like the connection on the letters though step 2 does that say baron??? u gotta check out the new to graff thread... lose every arrow in that pic and start with simpler shit, right now the pic just makes no sense in a lot of spots...u gotta put in work before u do a big piece and i can tell ur newer
crits step two dont do so many tiny as arrows if your gonna do arrows make them fit with wat your doing kew your letters are kinda wack im not gonna tell you to do simplies just work on ur letters sin lol same first but i dont know why you made your I so big and ur r so small idk just try to work on letter size massacre gez lol man im your number one fan lol jk and heres a peice i did in my planner xD [/IMG]
much better with the outlines connected.... looks like u went a little wild on the highlights though, id tone that down, and bring the line in the middle of the n all the way down too, makes things look less flat
this is actually really good. that W and A are near perfect. I think the only thing this piece really needs is more balance. The extension on the back of the S even makes sense if you bring the rest of the S up a little further. and personally I wouldnt have 2 extensions coming out of the top of my S like that...but if your going to you should make the extension on the front of the S connect with the T. Here is a little visual of what im talking about [Broken External Image]:http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/860/whoknows.jpg obviously^^ this looks like shit im just trying to give you an idea of what im talking about. Also you should know that there was a writer that wrote waster and has passed away. and they will give you shit about it on this forum. im not im just warning you.
step2 u just have no concept of bars, thats what bets means is u should write regular capital letters and keep the same general concept of where each bar in the letter goes, and when u draw it keep a relative thickness... like the chunks on ur S are over twice the size of the actual bars in the letter
that waste is pretty fly dude, but I don't dig the extensions on the back of the e and s. i bet you can tell which one was at the bottom of my backpack.