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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. shem

    shem Senior Member

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    geek thats dope. the first E bothers me tho..i think it needs to be defined just alittle bit more.
     
  2. sodi

    sodi Senior Member

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  3. woonybomber

    woonybomber Banned

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    geek i think one of the bars on the k should go up more and look like the top of the G and the Es juss so it will flow more but that shit still is tihgt man
     
  4. M3KA1!

    M3KA1! Elite Member

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    Geek im diggin it
     
  5. woonybomber

    woonybomber Banned

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    ai931.photobucket.com_albums_ad159_datkewlkid09_graff004_6.jpg
    trying to do a emo dude lol its mad shitty
     
  6. One Evil

    One Evil Elite Member

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  7. Fury

    Fury Elite Member

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    Geek - Looks sick but you gotta change up the second E to not make it look the same.
    Safer - The first looks like it says SPEAR. Just change the A and it'll look good
     
  8. sinkilla1

    sinkilla1 Elite Member

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    geek you gotta alot fucking better since the first time i saw you on here
     
  9. Patchy

    Patchy Senior Member

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    Woony that looks alot like the one that got you suspended work on your L and dont put so much backwards diagonal bar at the bottom. The I and the Z are pretty good but im not feeling the E either.
     
  10. DENO.ONE!

    DENO.ONE! Senior Member

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    hAveK x Senior Member

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  12. lord_plankton

    lord_plankton Elite Member

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    home, your stuff is nice, youve a generall understanding of your letters,
    able to keep style through pieces, coloring , lights, 3d overall very well,
    up to intermediateid say . in the first piece, h looks like k at first sight,
    uuhhm letters all consist of quite thick bars, only h goes extremly thin at one point, and well one could say uve extensions comin out of nowhere
    ...still i like it.

    2nd pice mmh well nothing special, lose the extension of the h, lower its middle bar n work it all over again.

    3rd piece, h nicely set off, forgot to thickn the outline top extension,
    i dont like how you connect o m ,id rather connect em all or none, o is too big..might be because of your very low m,
    but u definately got to define it more, kinda like little arrow bottom h,
    id do kinda same with the e, all for the harmony...def. has potential...
     
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  13. zaco

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  14. Fury

    Fury Elite Member

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    ^ It's simple, but good. Also, don't draw throwies attached to the bottom; get used to drawing the whole letter.
     
  15. Vagrant

    Vagrant Elite Member

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    Why the hell not?
    Throwies can't stand?
    Gotta float?
    Esplain yoself!
     
  16. Fury

    Fury Elite Member

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    Come on, EVERYBODY knows that the good throws have Godlike powers and can float at will, thus not being attached to any form of ground and they can do whatever the fuck they want!
     
  17. Patchy

    Patchy Senior Member

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    Zaco im digging that shit for some reason. Keep it simple
     
  18. woonybomber

    woonybomber Banned

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    for the wore battle i might try a diff one im not shore if i want this on to be my entry crits

    ai931.photobucket.com_albums_ad159_datkewlkid09_graff004_7.jpg
     
  19. One Evil

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  20. Patchy

    Patchy Senior Member

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    @ woony. IMO either lose or work on the character it doesn't really go with the letters

    One evil what does it say bro?