hey rewt ill give you some tag advice, make all your letters lean one direction i tcould give that some flavor

 

Yeahh, too simple. but if you're going to go that simple, you can't do so many add-ons. Do one underline, then a smaller underline in the middle of that underline. That should give you a good base to build on for your handy.

 

any crits?

 

your A is real clean. though your L needs to be bigger, it looks like its barely there. and maybe just lower the kick on that N it looks too sharp

 

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Try balancing out the other side, Black.

that F is iffy too.. I think you should try SA_ER ha. because your F's seem to be your weak point in everything.

 

If i could get some crits from someone who knows what theyre doing with one liners thatd be cool. kthx

safer - third one is good, make the letters more proportional though.

 

lose the thing on the r and dont make the botom of the s come up so high when you conet it to the n

 

the S and the R are suppose to balance each other out. symmetry guys.

 

enoozr very original name, i think if you keep fucking around with ur hand it can turn out big

 

needs work if thats what you wanna do, the r is easily bigger then the s

 

Crits?

 

@Entr - take out the triangle shit coming from the "R" then clean up the circle around it.

 

Word. Next time out, I won't use so many add-ons.

Is there supposed to be a bar parallel to the bigger bar, like on the left end of the check? Lol.

 

Thankss.
The circle around the tag just was just to remind me thats the one i was gonna post on here

 

entr i actually like that handstyle alot and i would say keep the triangle thing.

 

Fersuree.
I have a different R too so i ain't really trippin about that.
Just came up with it today and wanna see what you foos think before i get out and catch spots

 

@ BlacktodaFuture, i like the top one and the one to the right, try to even out the later two though.

birk

crits.... i like the top right one myself