erge,go simple... shore, first one is aight but that h is way tooo thick in the middle and the e looks too thick..2nd ones is fresh but that thing on top of the o and that e areee like wtfff..your doing stupid mistakes,it happends to all of us keep practicing im fealing that style you got going on kew,if you add some 3d it might not look that bad but im not fealing it too much the way it is.. atesk- [Broken External Image]:http://i703.photobucket.com/albums/ww39/Ironclad_2009/borat_nice.jpg wg- im fealing it but i think you went overboard with accessories like the letters getting peeled off, the backround you should have just left it with the green and thats it..but still overall nice [Broken External Image]:http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3108.jpg crits?
Sketch battle well be post in about 30mins. Any entries after then wont be accepted. BATTLE IS CLOSED
thanks. used cool grey prismas. 80, 40 and 20%. first time i tried doin a drop like that. not real happy with it but im never happy with the first attempt.
Shore, Kew, and Daz, I'd suggest you all go simpler; you're getting ahead of yourselves. The more you try to rush a style, the worse its going to look because you're missing out on vital steps in style development. Wgone: Looks pretty cool overall, but it's a bit busy too. I like the colors and the peeling idea, but some of the add-ons are a bit distracting. Overall, nice work. It's the best entry for that battle I've seen so far, so good job. Atesk: Lookin' good- really diggin' that drop shadow. If there's a letter there you need to work on, it is the S. The lower half looks a little sketchy, but I can't put my finger on what would look good. Maybe make the lower half look like the lower half of the Y? Tofe: I haven't posted here in awhile, but it doesn't really look like you've progressed at all. I'd crack down and practice getting down some proper simples and repeating it time after time until you get it. I'm not sure if it's that you don't practice enough or that it isn't clicking for ya. Your E really doesn't fit there, bar thicknesses are inconsistent, zero flow between the F and E (that's gonna be hard to do...), etc. Keep at it though. I haven't been sketching much lately, but I've been working on a throw, and I know my piece hasn't changed a bit, but here's a pic for talking: View attachment 543883
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dr. sprai - I think the first ones a bit to busy. and the 3D is fucked up on your 3rd piece. The 3d on your last one is tight tho, thats probably my favourite one. rin5e - drop shadow needs work, and maybe the are could use abit of tweaking. asker - the throws good i think but the K should fit the style more maybe have a more circular part somewhere as all your other letters do.
yeah man like i said before. go simpler. you're trying to bend bars but you dont have enough experience to know where and how to bend the bars yet. go simple, learn the structure and the rest will fall into place. edit* pic of my exchange with virus for talking [Broken External Image]:http://img32.imageshack.us/img32/4241/002jpl.jpg