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WOW its been a while, latest works. atmos - your simples work is probs the best, but keep your bars the same width - you have done this in your inked pieces. plus dont add pointless extensions ask your self why you have done that. and if it works. charaks are kool thou. props for them.

Snap. that throw is dope. put that shit up on a wall and link me it.

Keso - simples.

dr. simples. keyboard use the other thread for help.

ateskone - wow you have improved that shit looks like its coming off the page. means that you have done the shadow well.

 

did this kid really make ANOTHER account? you're a fool.

wow shamee's back haha. thanks man good to see an old head posting again. looks like you've improved too. lets see a full piece.

 

damn this is gorgeous. solid style solid coloring and the drop shadow is amazing. this shit pops out. good shit mayne

 

yo leaks howd u make that avatar?

 

Quick pencil sketch, yes I bit on the s and r sum, but I'm workin on changing it up

 

lookin good. but on that B connect the middle bar.

 

you can definitely tell that S was bit. its like 10 times better than any of the other letters. idk the piece doesnt really flow either. the OMB and E are all different styles. choose a style and stick to it.

 

Learn to adjust your other letters to fit that S.

 

i was tryin to do that... any ideas?

 

Notice how the bars look, how they get wider toward the end, and follow the structure. That'll help you out for sure. :]

 

thanks. ill do that hah

 

Notice how the bars look, how they get wider toward the end, and follow the structure. That'll help you out for sure. :]

 

for the rr tournament... should be posted soon i guess but ill post for crits

 

im reaaaaally feeling that man

 

honestly i dont think you should try that. there's too many inconsistancies in your bar widths from letter to letter. notice how skinny the leg on the R is compared to the leg of the M. i would work with simpler pieces if i were you until you can get solid widths throughout the entire piece.

nice zook. thats probably my favorite piece i've seen from you.

 

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I think overall your kinda getting it, the shadowing and 3-d is really nice. I think you biggest problem is how you "round" off your letters. If you look at the top of the T E and F they all kinda float off the same way. My crit to you would be to try to use a some bars to round off the top of your letters diffrently, kinda like you did in the beggining of your T.

 

LOL and i just realized i probably bumped something from like 100 pages back. My bad

 

didnt make it. found it online by accident then edited it on photobucket

 

dont you think its a bit hasty to call that a bite?? i mean its a pretty generic s, its like ive seen it 10000000 times but its the same with the rest of the letters..idk maybe s is just his best n favourite???
Somber, your m is your major flaw plus your letters are really squeezed, try to maintain the same style throughout your whole piece...overall i guess stick to atesk advice n work with simpler stuff

hey crust you still up for the battle?? i kind of forgot about it, just give me conditions n deadline and well be on our way