[Broken External Image]:http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/8717/img0175b.jpg WOW its been a while, latest works. atmos - your simples work is probs the best, but keep your bars the same width - you have done this in your inked pieces. plus dont add pointless extensions ask your self why you have done that. and if it works. charaks are kool thou. props for them. Snap. that throw is dope. put that shit up on a wall and link me it. Keso - simples. dr. simples. keyboard use the other thread for help. ateskone - wow you have improved that shit looks like its coming off the page. means that you have done the shadow well.
[Broken External Image]:http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/8717/img0175b.jpg WOW its been a while, latest works. atmos - your simples work is probs the best, but keep your bars the same width - you have done this in your inked pieces. plus dont add pointless extensions ask your self why you have done that. and if it works. charaks are kool thou. props for them. Snap. that throw is dope. put that shit up on a wall and link me it. Keso - simples. dr. simples. keyboard use the other thread for help. ateskone - wow you have improved that shit looks like its coming off the page. means that you have done the shadow well.
did this kid really make ANOTHER account? you're a fool. wow shamee's back haha. thanks man good to see an old head posting again. looks like you've improved too. lets see a full piece.
damn this is gorgeous. solid style solid coloring and the drop shadow is amazing. this shit pops out. good shit mayne
you can definitely tell that S was bit. its like 10 times better than any of the other letters. idk the piece doesnt really flow either. the OMB and E are all different styles. choose a style and stick to it.
Notice how the bars look, how they get wider toward the end, and follow the structure. That'll help you out for sure. :]
Notice how the bars look, how they get wider toward the end, and follow the structure. That'll help you out for sure. :]
honestly i dont think you should try that. there's too many inconsistancies in your bar widths from letter to letter. notice how skinny the leg on the R is compared to the leg of the M. i would work with simpler pieces if i were you until you can get solid widths throughout the entire piece. nice zook. thats probably my favorite piece i've seen from you.
[Broken External Image]:http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3108.jpg crits?[/quote] I think overall your kinda getting it, the shadowing and 3-d is really nice. I think you biggest problem is how you "round" off your letters. If you look at the top of the T E and F they all kinda float off the same way. My crit to you would be to try to use a some bars to round off the top of your letters diffrently, kinda like you did in the beggining of your T.
dont you think its a bit hasty to call that a bite?? i mean its a pretty generic s, its like ive seen it 10000000 times but its the same with the rest of the letters..idk maybe s is just his best n favourite??? Somber, your m is your major flaw plus your letters are really squeezed, try to maintain the same style throughout your whole piece...overall i guess stick to atesk advice n work with simpler stuff hey crust you still up for the battle?? i kind of forgot about it, just give me conditions n deadline and well be on our way