if someone posts some shitty looking graff in here they pretty much get ripped apart for it anyway, its just that theres a wave of new ones every week that think theyre intermediate so theres at least a few shit pieces per page... but the regulars know whose a step up from toy and whose not, just gotta be more of a dick when u see something that doesnt look good in here... my opinion is that if u can keep ur bars flowing then ur intermediate, if ur shit looks wobbly and uneven ur a toy... people like duke alts crust squint zoner bilnek atesk rayz are intermediate, but blast zen kew safer stotr and people on that level just need a little more time... no hate just bein blunt
What is garbage about it? i want to get the new style down then combined the old style and new style together. Im getting influence from DC writers.
the structure just seems weak. the bars dont seem very consistant and there's a lot more negative space than there was in your old style. the flow lacks and the extensions seem too forced and random whereas your old style flowed great and the few extensions worked perfectly with the simplicity of the letters. i also dont like how blocky your new style is. idk i just woulda stuck with the original style and developed it more if it was me. dont fix what aint broken.
if this pic is ur old shit id stick with this... its way better than the other stuff ur posting [Broken External Image]:http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/2141/photo975.jpg
yea i think u and safer would be considered intermediate if u took some time on a sketch... like i said im not hatin just givin my opinion on whose intermediate and who isnt ready yet.... but as far as bar consistency u and safer are more advanced than the others i named lol but like i said u just need a little more time
the ones i take time on i get frustrated and don't finish. its obvious we understand bars, flow, balance, etc. but i agree some time is needed. GOOD CRITS WOULD HELP lol.
yea yea I agree. kinda old piece but one of my faves. would this be half intermediate? View attachment 561824
i try to give the most detailed crits i can without being an ass... what makes that stotr piece toy is the bars plain and simple, both vertical bars on the Ts are uneven and dont flow well, same with the diagonal bars on the S and R. the chips are in bad places, chips look better coming off the end of a bar. and on a personal note i dont like the popout things on the top of the letters.... the concept of the 8ball isnt bad but when ur making an object especially a round one it has to be on point, the center white part of the 8ball should be a circle like the ball itself but instead its more of a half circle with straight lines on the right side... know what i mean? to me intermediate pieces should have cleaner lines and ur bars should flow nice, intermediate should be people that have the basics down pat but just need input on what direction to take their style
[Broken External Image]:http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/6940/dsc01397lk.jpg would put in Ttagz but its always such a circle jerk there. post a sketch in second too.
yea their aton of fun. a good workout too, i was sore for a couple days after this one [Broken External Image]:http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/6359/dscn1372x.jpg
I've Always wanted to do a roller. Didn't know if its alright to post stencils in here but i think i have surpassed the toy stencil thread. [Broken External Image]:http://i869.photobucket.com/albums/ab260/hepatitis_M/Photo0071.jpg?t=1274057202 [Broken External Image]:http://i869.photobucket.com/albums/ab260/hepatitis_M/Photo0114.jpg?t=1274057230 Crits?
rollers are supposed to be huge and sloppy... i like the zoner, i was gonna ask if u ran outta both colors since theres no dot in the R and the incomplete outline... the ms roller looks good though too
so ive been doing some straight letter simples lately with my name.... how do i Progress?i'll get flicks up in a sec..
bleh.... i have no idea how to really work with simples.... edit: can anyone offer some advice with examples of what to properly do in paint like i see you guys do sometimes?