i love the over all flow of this... i love when you can make a nice thin tag thats not straight letters look good with lots of letter connections... the only think i would work on is making the letters just a little mor regognizable.. i got them after a second... but.. it did take me a few seconds to read it... over all i love this

 

Lol there's no flow in that.

Last two pages have been awful.

except kuto.

 

I agree the letters are all over.. and a little hard to regonize.. i just like the general Idea hes going with... though im not a fan of sharp letters.

 

zewls hands arent bad, i bet itd look a lot better on a wall and with a clearer pic... this page is pretty poopy though so i thought id contribute...

drunk in cleveland last weekend, didnt flick anything that wasnt on my way home so i missed a few... mostly shitty pics anyway, mostly

 

Let's be honest here.
You wern't drunk.

 

i thought they came out ok for stumbling... but yea, sierra nevada pale ale baby! (tastes like shit)

 

that stuff is terrible^^^^ (not the tags)
anyways i kinda changed the lettering on mine, its not amazing but i thought id post it on here to get crits.
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okay, is this better than VEDA it says AR20 ??

 

really quick tag i made gonna add flares and usse a chisel next time but this is the starting point what do u think? oh changed my name again haha, its atone now

 

veda tags need to have flow, and when u trace over lines it kills the flow, do ur tag in one fluid motion and it will look better, dont try to make it too stylish yet, the letters should look like AR20 to start out

atone i dont like the triangle O or the A, the E is ok but not with the other letters, stop sketching out ur tags with pencils people!

 

okay... thanks, no pencil anymore... lol so question is AR20 better than Veda as far as flow goes?

 

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lol better?? I'm trying guyss

 

Eat babies(Nom nom nom nom).
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your a comes off as an n in that one safe. Might want to extend that bar a little farther left. But i like how it looks pretty dope.

 

ya that A is isnt too clear that its and A. i dont really get the bottom extension on the S. but over all your letters are clean

 

@blacktodafuture

wtfs up with the giant circle around it that shits wack. and what are thoes plates?

 

what the fuck, sierra nevada is delicious!

 

Blackto- You seem to have a nice cap, but you're definitely not using it to its potential. No flow to either of those hands and the circle is just awful. Keep at it. There is some decent parts of those hands, but overall, just poorly executed.
Ibu- I love your hands, but I'm having trouble with this one. It might just be the flick of it. Don't know how to crit it, though.
V3da- there just seems to be very little form in your letters. I'm guessing it says Arzo, but it looks like A32O. Work.On.Structure.

I'm trying to learn some of my hands backwards. First attempt