Please don't tell him to do something he will regret. You've basically just told him to stop doing the only unique thing in his throw besides his 'L', which happens to be both interesting and original. I think its time for Flash to leave the toy forum so his throwie won't be ruined by you telling him to 'fix' it.
flash one has mad skills wit his throws ive always thought he had a dope style.. props dude keep it up and fuck what half these kids think youve came along way no doubt.
imo the only thing wrong wit flashes bomb is the L(looks like it could be a ugly t) but meh and the H it seems to small and crowded but other then that the over lapping and all that looks good gives it that original flava flave ya kno... we all are diff and eachother thinks differently and imo flash that bombs tight but get out on the street wit throws keep them chill walls for piecers ya kno... stayup yo
oh sorry, since when has evryone had to share the same opinion. maybe theres a reason his l is original ^this
[Broken External Image]:http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO0729.jpg hork - legit. you should try messing with some different fills
Hork- That kid is retarded, no offense. You're stuff is okay, but nothing fresh yet. It's straight though, everyone starts out rough. No beef or anything, just keepin' your head straight. I feel on the R and K, I've done that before a few times haha. Fix the amount each letter over laps, and the size, thickness, and amount of dead space for each letter to relatively the same. They kinda all go hand in hand, but yeah. And extensions are just like your letters, if they aren't flowing, they aren't working. Check your shadow on your K. You look like you got some good can control though, I know you can put it to good work bro. I'd tweak that throwie some too, a lotta dead space on that h, maybe have the arch swing high? I dunno, just play with it. And make sure you're letter size is the same as well. View attachment 581388 Just freestyled this shit, the extension on the O looks retarted, but yeah. Ran out of purple so I couldn't cut lines on the background.
I know this was a freestyle, but start over: Lose the highlights, work on all of your letters, lose the bump on the G and make it straight normal, lose the arrow in your tag and lose the double stroke and add 3D.
Rewt should look at that Rez simple.... and then maybe start trying to do something like that.... you know, bending and adding on and shit... and honestly.... turn that drop shadow into 3D... it will take like hardly any more time and look alot better... more space will seem taken up (unless you stop making all those straight bars, then you can go back to drop shadow) Edit: If you get rid of the RE and first bar of the W you could have a pretty cool lookin NT with a little work on the T