nice boom, i like second one.. am i going right way with simps? i just learned what they were today..
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nice boom i like last one's 3d, how am i doing with simps. this is my first time trying simps so.

 

Top code all letters except the c and o overlap too much, all letter bars are different width 3d is off badly bud, looks like should all be down and to the right, inner part of the d has both right and left drop shadow and e has upper and lower.


Simp...same basic problems, bars all different widths and 3d a bit fooked all over, pick a direction and make sure you stick to it.


Lower code is your best effort, bars relativley same size till you hit the e, then i dunno what happened. Also lose the lil doo dads off the e, you need basics down first bud before you start addin anything yet

 

Exi: check it out like a simple E would have four bars.. X two bars so forth.. just make sure when you do simples to make all the letters even size and make sure your bars are straight and your bar has even width throughout the bar.. best i can explain. hope this helps
Saint: S and A overlap to much and maybe its your style but i think it would look better if the letter were a bit less rounded off..

 

i like it slek u should try it with the e straigh with no angle, just to see if it flows more

 

Thank, I'll practice when I get out of the shower

Okay thanks, I'll be suer to do that

 

You come to this website while you're in the shower?
LOL.

 

yeah man.. haha no, I was about to head in the shower lol.

 

thanks

 

dont make the R slant like that and dont have that uh whatever going through the middle of the piece, other than that pretty solid, kinda of a advance simple I guess.

 

Bumpin for crits

 

color schemes and 3d and all that jazz are solid, but work on the letters themselves cuz they are key. The W and Y are good, but IMO work on the Ts and S,

 

Boom-In that first one Im not really feeling the Y and I dont like how the T's are not connected. your bar width is good in the first one, i leke the softness of the letters.

 

crits?

 

Make
Boom
Mase
..All clean and dope shit

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please gimme detailed, professional and constructive crits please:

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thanks in advance for not bullshitting

 

Bars on the A on the top one is a tiny bit to narrow I think dude, niiice fill tho,