sech - thats not working out man..make them simple like the letter r stigma - i dont like how each letter has a random extension made just so they can connect,makes it look wierd and unproportioned..the colors are cool fuck the fame - go simple surge - that character is pretty wack no offence..paint the pink one,just fix the "r" slek - not diggin the loop in your s,or any of the letter connections or arrows prea - did you even try? that letter e is literally behind the r fury - that looks messy man and that letter z looks horrible ,work on that hand aswell jiz - good simple,wack name. boomslang - start doing all your sketches like the 2nd one,those letters looks MUCH much better than the 1st pic..haha i like how the end of the t looks like razor blade, u should have put it on the 1st "t" so it gives a balance and i would have taken it off completely from the bottom abu - make that "a" bigger [Broken External Image]:http://i810.photobucket.com/albums/zz26/flippingchickens/DSCN3555.jpg the top peice is a freestyle thats why the majority of the cracks look wack [Broken External Image]:http://i810.photobucket.com/albums/zz26/flippingchickens/DSCN3556.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i810.photobucket.com/albums/zz26/flippingchickens/DSCN3541-2.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i810.photobucket.com/albums/zz26/flippingchickens/DSCN3553.jpg
dr0ping - i love your style, When i drew this i was thinking about your style in school lol. what do you use for your colours?
quickie during the blunt sesh last night [Broken External Image]:http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/5072/photoazr.jpg
Lol @ prea, you got some balls calling anyones work shit bud, have you even looked at half the crap you have posted?
S is whack... n is whack... t is whack... forcefield is whack... 3d is whack... bars are whack.... I would say just completely do a new one and don't try anything to crazy, gotta learn to walk before ya run...
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crits on this... View attachment 587109 nel- the bottom pic...the addons are wack.. like the throwie though.. the second bottom pic has to many connections on the n