Quick crit before I ink?

mone-O doesn't fit, also think the extension off the E looks kinda out of place. Nice an clean though.
lord p- could leave out the arrows, they look kinda weak. I like the E in one though, and are those like blacklight markers or some shit or you just take the negative?
hear-on your last post not feelin the E. The others above though are pretty fiyah.
bait-looks ill to me.
messer-sorry, just don't like it. to much going on, structure is kinda weird on some. Has poential though
squint- diggin it all but the U.

 

bait- baller
hear- always nice structure, i wanna see a lowercase a in one of ur pieces sometime
and mone always with the progress

crits welcome, my first non-intoxicated piece in a while

 

i like the drunk better , no connection n shit.

hugz, take your own advice n yeah i even use blacklight paper.

mone, i really dislike your m wizh the kinda long nose...i like the smokecloud bg though

 

here's a bunch of simps , the eight bit is for a battle , which one do you guys think i sshould battle with the top or bottom

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mone exchange color it later too tired today
wgone bottom one for sure

 

Bait Exchange

 

Fill on the 3d looks ill, do that sheet more

 

yo silent u registred,ill do an exchange with u but bit later cause ive got my hands full already n im one lazy ass

 

my b double post.

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BAIT- I like that ish, ink it
FACE (FAGE?) The E is good, F isn't. Make the right bar on the A thinner. Try an make your letters match the style of the E. And I swear I've seen that D in your handstyle before.... If you're gonna go for the gurnge handy make all your letters grungy--The I,E, and A aint happenin

 

lololol @ SEYO in the pg thread the inter thread is like overan with toys

 

a piece for Selm

Colored

 

wanna exchange

 

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Fosho logic hit me up

 

some bored ish with crayola markers i know the R's a little funky but its a work in progress
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Shit's dope, diggin the steez and the coloring. The S could be thicker in spots though

 

ye says slot.er if u didnt know jus sayin
anyways baits-good shit man looks dope wanna exchange?
wings-loving the last one and the pink one dope shit pink ones really different from u i like it
mogan-that sawe is pree dope man dunno what to say bout it
HUGZNOTTHUGZ-does that say mejk and if could rock me a slotr or slot.er one wanna exchange as well?

flick for talking says 1ok the k is kinda weird
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mogan..last two you posted it seems as if your last letter is too small compared to the rest..

 

Yeah the M does look kind of small now that I look at it