When I'm not writing or looking at some shit online i def will, take it easy son

 

bump, any crits?

 

Reminds me of my old old old throws. Fix your R, use the last E.

 

lado
Lose the force field on the second and fix the R, it's not nice at all and doesn't work. IMO.
The shadow looks decent on the last throw too.


for what its worth, I'm a toy but I hope you still appreciate the crit

 

I appreciate all crits. And it says SEA, not SER :S

 

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Hipe I don't understand why you switched your name? and I do not understand why your stuff is still coming out wack... I've seen you post a lot better Hipe throwie weeks ago

 

Oh true, in that case lose the little cross at the top of the line, really looks like an R son.

 

yeah i was looking for a change and recently found out that a local guy has been writing hype for years .... I have simple bubble letter throws im working on, maybe I will progress one day

 

I don't like how blocky your new stuff i looking

 

And why are you so obsessed with throwies? Why don't you draw some fuckin' straight letters, then work on a solid throw

 

dont have much direction thought that throws was where to start but yeah ill try some straights

 

Alright cool dude, thanks

 

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yeah...

 

Phat thats nice, theres just a little to much going on

 

Hey, Ive been workin on a 2Lips throw but I just cant get it down cuz of the negative space the 2 and L create. I usually write it as 2LiPS. I dont have a camera atm but Ill get up pics when I can, any tips?

 

Tighten up your letters so as to reduce negative space, I dont see how a bubble 2L could leave that much space though.

 

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^ watch them drips homie