that says BR right? the r is prey ugly and I see two bars in the middle of the s that don't make sense to me, turn that hand into a one liner and i think it would be pretty sick. and keep your bars proportional
Mark: That food looks gross. Sir: You have like a billion arrows. Stop. And drop the crown. How can I make this less shitty guyzzz?
and fix your structure. make your letters more "box-like" if that means anything bars are easy to understand if you go to the new to graffiti thread or check out that acid above you and youll understand what everyone means by bars
Sir to u.. need to do some simple and drop color and everything else and just do simples.. Like it mewl..here's a few pages out my bb..
Clash - Youve got to work on structure pal, those extensions on the L, C and H are whack as shit. I'd ditch those altogether. To be fair it wouldnt look too bad if you tidied it up a bit. Get those straight lines level and actually straight. Mewn - Not sure if that E fits the style, but it looks pretty sick anyway! Been playing around with the word 'Denie' - The D looks a bit like a P, and not sure about the 3D. Crits would be appreciated.
skope im really feeling this denie. do it up son! oh yeah an vader? im impressed kid. ur very creative wit your fills an all that. peace
Clash.........homie how you gunna say anything to anyone. Dave Chapelle said it best "thats doo doo baby!" And i never say shit to no one too, but you made me do it.
[Broken External Image]:http://piczasso.com/i/hz1j2.jpg Denie- the only things i dont like are how far the dot is from the rest of the i and the D would look better connected, or if that disconnected part was broken and a little slanted you get me? Also it looks a little like a P so watch that Vade I like that third one, a little too much special effects and shit, but good letters. keep doing your thing
^Thats on point *****, only thing id say is its kinda hard to see cause the colors you chose, if u went over it with a slightly darker blue or even the same blue just made a lil darker its be dope
Not sure if the cloudy I thing was a good idea. Just looking for crits i guess. Ill give some out when theres some more up here, obviously its a new page and that..
Decent man, though maybe just keeping the clouds for the dot in the "I" would have been better. was bored on the plane heading to Greece, crits are welcome.